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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie
Okay! How about this?
http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-show-dont-tell-course/
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Snapper replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of your characters react at that point or the reader will not react. For instance, if you think you can get your rea…
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie Thanks. I’m working on a revision. I’ll get back to you sooner or later. 😀
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Need Volunteers for a Secret KP Project in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree Yes! Shoot me an email.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@princessfoo Righty. Well, I don’t really read romance and I’m not an expert on it, but IÂ have written it just a bit.
My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of…[Read more]
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragongeek Aha! Your cover image is Toothless!!! AWESOME!
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Snapper replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@ethryndal First off, I’ve been meaning to say this.

Secondly,
YOU’VE BEEN ON FOR A YEAR?!! A YEAR ALREADY! SWEET!

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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose @ingridrd @princessfoo Ah! My bad. Here, try again.
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Daeus started the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Hi friends,
You may or may not know that show don’t tell is one of my favorite writing topics. The practical application of this is that I’m currently putting together an in-depth course to help people master the subject. Part 1 of this course is just about finished and ready for me to launch!
In preparation, I was wondering if you could take a…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic An Interesting Concept I'm Working On in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragongeek lol. Our editor in chief is using the same concept. http://josiahdegraaf.com/the-chronicles-of-morshan/
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Snapper replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
Oh, and good choice with TSFH! Yeah, there name is awful, but the music is great. So I call them TSFH. Have you heard any Audiomachine songs?
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Snapper replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragongeek Awesome name. I myself am Dragon Snapper, pleased to meet your confetti-filled acquaintance. 😀
What’s your favorite … um … *tries to think of an original question*
Meh, forget that.
What’s your least favorite book? I personally can’t stand the Incredible Journey. Or, what was that other book? Ah, the Glass Sentence. I also…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragongeek Hi! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.
*patiently waits to see what your answers are to Kate’s questions*
Oh, and of course I have to ask what your personality type is. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
*huge sigh of relief* I don’t see anywhere in here that says you’re leaving. When I first started reading your post, it sounded like you were leaving. I’m glad you’re not. 😀
Keep watching out for dragons. 😉
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Because I promised I would… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Looks lit
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Snapper and
Lillian Parks are now friends 8 years, 6 months ago -
Daeus replied to the topic War-Torn City in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper Oh, or you could have a nearby mountain that started showing signs of volcanic activity.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic I need writing books! Help! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@allison-grace I have a lot of recommendations. Have you checked out our resource library yet? We’ve got our official staff recommendations in there, and I’d just be repeating what I’ve already written there. xD
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Need Volunteers for a Secret KP Project in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@nicolerivers03 Yes–absolutely! We still have space for a couple more, so shoot me an email and we can work out details from there. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic War-Torn City in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper A plague makes sense to me.
Monsters or demons take over the city.
The water gets poisoned.
An unexplained phenomenon creeps out the city so bad they all leave. I.e. 1% of the population mysteriously disappears every Saturday at exactly 12:43 A.M.
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