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Snapper replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@daeus Thankee. *bows* Well, I tried incorporating small ‘good’ things and it’s been a lot let dismal lately. I think I just let Ike gnaw on dismal’ness’ for too long. XD
@sarah-anson I really like the italicized bit you said there. *nods* I agree. Thanks!
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years ago
@warrioroftherealm *salutes* Awesome!
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years ago
@christianna-hellwig @rochellaine @emma-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99
Thanks so much for your suggestions, everyone! Here’s what I have now.
“Oh, stars that remember the firstthings forgotten
How earth and its peoples were early begotten
They looked and beheld through a pane of dark glass
The earth in a swirling, untamable mass
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years ago
@christianna-hellwig Thanks so much! I’ll take a look over this as soon as I get a chance.
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years ago
@emma-flournoy Ha! Well, we’ll see. I’d certainly love to.
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years ago
@emma-flournoy Sure, here’s one. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV9qnLtpy4Cwn8-JFfJaXzOn4A5-yqRBR-AqlFIyYdk/edit?usp=sharing
Yeah, song creation and all that. I probably should have come up with something more original, but in my defense the song creation is the basis for the whole magical system, the last book’s allegorical aspects, and the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @rochellaine Thanks. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 More for metric pattern, but either one.
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Daeus started the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years ago
Hi KeePers,
Any of you who write structured poetry, I could use a bit of help with a poem I’ve written. This is for the fantasy novel I’m writing and essentially recounts the first events of the world.
My problem is that I know a few spots have clunky meter. I generally have a good ear for meter and maybe I could fix this by myself, but…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Unlikable Protagonist? in the forum Characters 8 years ago
@introvert_girl Sam really said it already, but you can also add a backstory to show why the character acts the way they do. The overall tone of the story will help too. I think though that the most important thing is proactivity, like Sam said.
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Snapper changed their profile picture 8 years ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@sam-kowal *is honored that you think me a hero in dragondom*
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
To Stan: No, I’m still a dragon. I can still melt chairs. This is just the human me. Worry not, Stan. We’re still dragon friends. *offers you a melted chair*
To Sam: 😛 (XD Still a dragon. Once a dragon, always a dragon.) I wrote 1144, so I’m signing out now. 🙂 Good luck on your new book!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@sam-kowal *nods* XD
Turns to Stan: Why aren’t you talking to Sam? I thought you two were best buds?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@sam-kowal *hands Stan cough medicine* Why, what’s wrong with him?
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Snapper posted an update 8 years ago
@kate-flournoy @dekreel @hope @anyone else… Just letting you guys know that I change my name and profile picture, so if you can’t find Dragon Snapper, that’s where I am. XD 😛
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@dragon-snapper
Whoa. Mixed emotions. This is different5% of me is going: “Cool!”
Another 5% of me: “OMIWORD I KNOW HER NAME!”90% of me: “NoOoOoOoOO, I liked your dragon self! CHANGE BACK!!” *starts crying*
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XD I’m keeping my name up, but you two win. I’m a dragon again. 😛 @sam-kowal @dekreel (I think I like it better too. LOL) I can’t change my profile picture without a revolt, can I?
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I actually did not mean to sound that heartbroken XD I was moody when I wrote that. But fair enough XD
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@dekreel XD Don’t worry about it. On here, I’m a dragon. It must stay that way forever. AND EVER!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@sam-kowal Sweet! 😀 I should be on for another 20 minutes or so…
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Snapper changed their profile picture 8 years ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
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