WarrenLuther04

@skredder Thank you! 😀 I’ll see what I can do about that last fight scene and doing more worldbuilding so it seems like it’s farther in the future. What loose ends specifically were you wanting tied up?

@jenwriter17

1. I really can’t decide between Uma and Rin, but I think I’m leaning more towards Uma. She has this mix of child-like mentality with such a quiet aura.

2. Whenever Rin was talking with Takara. I just really loved those interactions!

3. The fight at the end was confusing. I couldn’t envision it and the way it read felt like both…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Sorry, I just realized you said you get access to the last chapters? 🙁 Was there a problem on my end? Do you want me to re-link them to try again?

@warrenluther04 @ariel-ashira @skredder @ingridrd @sarah-anson @seekjustice @whoever else I missed Here’s the questions now that y’all have finished reading my book. Thank you all so very much! Your comments always make me so happy and help me to improve. <3 I’m sorry if I’m posting this and not everyone has finished it yet; I’ve lost track of w…[Read more]

@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Ooh, where are you going? (if you don’t mind me asking 😉 )

Well, I would suggestion starting by thanking them for their donation, tell them how much it blessed you to have them contribute. Make it personal; people like that. Maybe mention what you hope to accomplish on this trip, then the contributors kinda know what…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Wow, really?! Thanks for reading it. 😀 😀 😀

@jenwriter17 *wipes sweaty palms on jeans*  I just read all the chapters except the last three, which I can’t get access to.  Oh man, I just LOVE this!  One of the best things I have ever read!

@daughteroftheking  Okay, great!!!  Thank you.  😉

@kaya-young  Awesomesauce.  Thanks again!

@seekjustice Okay. 🙂  In that case I’ll show you what was distracting me. 😛

Now, isn’t that worthy of causing someone to be distracted?!!

Okay, okay.  Back to work.  Chara is doing better.  I think.  Well, anyway, Uncle Bill is doing better! 😉

I’m going to have a couple of questions about your formatting stuff in a little bit.  Maybe tomor…[Read more]

@seekjustice I think I’ll probably still be awake, but I’m not sure.  Just let me know when you get back and if I’m awake I’ll reply. 😉

I hope I’m still awake because I have a lot of work I want to get done!  See you soon!

@seekjustice ‘Lo!  Things is grand.  Getting distracted is a lot of fun.

How about you?

@alia Cool, you can sew?!  I can sew a little bit, but it’s mostly one of my sisters who does the sewing around here.  I just bought some fabric at JoAnn’s to attempt making a couple of summer blouses, though, since I need some new summer clothes.  I hope it works and I don’t ruin the fabric… 😛

@seekjustice oh, and about that blimey cow video you said you watched, I think I watched the same thing! 😀 it is so true!

@seekjustice @rochellaine I have to go too. Bye! 🙂

@alia okay, sleep well 🙂

@seekjustice, @jenwriter17, okay y’all, I gotta get some sleep.

@jenwriter17, yay

@alia @seekjustice alrighty then, I’ll check it out 🙂

@seekjustice, I like the story, but the soundtrack is amazing

@seekjustice, I don’t know the actual story, but I do know it was embellished, so on the off chance it was somewhat accurate, I didn’t want to say it wasn’t.

@jenwriter1, i’m sure I didn’t do it any justice in the description.

as Seekjustice said, the character development was good