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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine Hi! 😀 Seekjustice and I missed you during our late night chat 😉 (it wasn’t nearly as late as some of your chats 🙂 )
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 @rochellaine Sorry guys, I have to get off now.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine What made you go to bed so early last night? That is about as amazing as Daniel being speechless. 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira reading the last part of Seekjustice’s book, then I plan to do more editing.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 @ariel-ashira Halloo!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 Just catching up on emails, looking up stuff, whatever. How about you?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira Yay! what are you working on?
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Catwing replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 Here’s a thought, her mad scienctist uncle could have given her parents super powers. The bad guys found out he was experimenting with giving people powers, but don’t know he succeeded. The uncle knowing what they would do if they had the powers pretends to be far behind on his creation. He keeps all his notes in codes so the bad guy…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira's profile was updated 8 years, 4 months ago
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine Why don’t you like Josiah’s stories?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 I am on!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira @alia @kaya-young @skredder @rochellaine Anyone on?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 Whenever I hear “superhero WIP” I become wary because I pretty much hate Josiah’s stories, but I’ll try to give an unbiased opinion. 😛
So…my first thought on reading your ideas was that if I read the book I would immediately think her grandparents were villains. Maybe you should play this up a bit, and either have her trust them…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira Yes, her grandparents really love her a ton. Kaylee was told her parents died in a car accident, but I want the accident to be linked to some superhero business of some sort (maybe they were heroes???). haven’t quite figured out the theme.
yeah I guess Pinterest boards can tell a lot about a person 😉
thank you! 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 What a cool bunch of ideas! I like what @skredder suggested. I will try to think of something, and let you know if I have any ideas. So, do her “grandparents” care a lot for her? What happened to her parents? And do you know what theme you might be using?
I think biracial people are beautiful. I guess one way you could let r…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@skredder ooh yeah that’s a good idea *writes it down* thank you! <3
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Skredder replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
I think the second option is good, but I also think that she should have met him at least a few times even if she was too young to remember properly. But what if he’s not a mad-scientist? What if he’s actually good but there are some bad people who caught onto his experiment and have been funding him? However, the experiment is ready for…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
Aaaaand forgot to tag people 😛 @rochellaine @kaya-young @alia @ariel-ashira @seekjustice @catwing @daughteroftheking @claire-c @skredder @ingridrd
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Jenna Terese started the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
Okay y’all…
Now that I’ve finished the first draft of my sci-fi dystopian (and diving into the edits), I’ve been picking my next book project from my endless list of plot bunnies. And I think I’m going with a superhero book, that I’ve actually partly outlined already.
But I’m having a bit of trouble getting the plot off the ground. I need some…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Well, I really have to go now. Bye! 🙂
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