WalkByFaith

@ellette-giselle
Wow, it looks great!! Thank you so much!!!

@anyone-who-wishes-to-read

Chapter 7

Rage

Pain.

A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.

On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.

Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.

Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]

@jonas

you want an em dash instead of a hyphen

Noted. Thank you!!!

Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?

She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Let me think….yEs PlEaSe HeLp Me 😭😭😭

If you’re busy though, that’s fine no worries!

@rae

Sef

“You’re like my mom.”

She caught Chase staring, and giggled.

“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?”

She stroked the bird with her finger again.

@calyhuge

Sounds great XD I’m kinda excited!!!

@rae

Omc I’m so sorry…give me a second…I forgot AND I’ve been on a break for four days :/

@ellette-giselle

Wow, it looks awesome!

@ellette-giselle

Oh, wow, awesome! I didn’t know you could do that 😅. It sounds really interesting! Okay, I’ll let you know if I decide to!

What is it called?

@ellette-giselle

Congratulations on publishing your novel! Is it through Amazon, or what? What’s it about?

Okay, awesome! Thanks!

@whalekeeper

I LOVE it! Thank you so much!

Let’s try that again . . . @ellette-giselle

@ellette_giselle

If you’re not too busy, I would love a drawing of one of my characters! The same one I gave Whaley, Noa Montero. I can post her description here in a minute…

Also, I can’t remember if I introduced myself before… sorry if I haven’t. I’m hybridlore, a homeschooled soon-to-be-junior and I write YA science fiction. It’s nice to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Whoops, didn’t know if you wanted me to post all that stuff yet. Oh well 😅

@whalekeeper

Awesome! Those are cute, are they from your WIP?

Noa Montero

Curly dark hair, tan skin, and brown eyes. Seventeen years old. Wearing a navy long-sleeved shirt tucked into black cargo pants and black lace-up boots.

Noa is the ship’s assistant pilot and the protagonist. She’s been traveling on the Annora for years and has been fly…[Read more]

CONGRATS to @kyronthearcanin!!! She is now PUBLISHED!!!!!! 🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎉

@esther-c @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @freed_and_redeemed @rae @highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge @jonas @princesachronicles @thearcaneaxiom @trailblazer @everybody!

@ellette-giselle

Omc where do you find all these quotes? I love them!

@ellette-giselle

Oops I forgot to mention that I deleted the scene with her not wanting to talk to the Great One…so now it’s just the scene with her and Lilitu pretending to be animals.

I really liked it so I put it into the “scene recycling bin” if I need it again, but for now it’s not in the draft.

@everyone

Sixth Chapter!!!

Chapter 6

A Voice

Lir stretched out as far as the eye could see-the crown jewel of Andromeda, the pride of the Pythonos.

Sef stood on the hilltop, overlooking the city, taking in the sights and smells as if she were starving, though she knew she’d never be able to partake in the beauty of it all.

Paynes w…[Read more]