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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Sounds good! Yes, I think I get what you’re saying about Divine Election, but I don’t really know how it would change evangelism for me. Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?
I’m also pretty…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Totally gotcha. Sometimes it’s just good to get all your thoughts on a scene down, even if they don’t all end up in the final draft.
Sure. Hopefully you got what I meant, since this is kind of a controversial topic in Christian writing circles. In the end, it’s really up to the author who knows what’s best for their story h…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Awww! Really sweet scene. So… could I get some more backstory here? 😅 Aaron died because he was a Christian and didn’t give into the government, but the reason everyone else is still alive is because the gov doesn’t know they’re believers? And if Noah was tortured once for his faith, how did he escape?
I know this kind of thin…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@jonas I would love a link to the doc! And also, I don’t care. We can probably reach the city with just one more RP, so feel free to add them in whenever.
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hybridlore and freedom are now friends 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@jonas I think we’re between the city and forest, so either one lol. @whalekeeper @loopylin
Sara —> Edge of Elderstrand
“Well, then,” the man said. “Should we try the city? I have a feeling that’s where we’ll best find answers.”
Sara looked toward the deserted, ominous-looking city and bit her lip. “I guess so.”
As the four of them left the fo…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Sara —> Edge of Elderstrand
“But you can just call me Ellis.” The young man patted the sword at his side. Ellis—a lavender name that carried the scent of violets.
“I’m Sara.” She looked to the other girl and the boy who hadn’t introduced themselves yet.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Lol. It was just such a sad chapter 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Good point!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I think it makes sense? lol. Yeah, I get what you mean. If that’s the case, harp—which is similar to piano, in my understanding—could have the potential to have many voices but a lot of times is used to play chords (at least, with the left hand.) Same with guitar. Violin, two strings aren’t normally played but it isn’t uncommon. Lots of t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Where is the line between a chord and just playing more than one note at a time? How does this change the Strings?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Yeah, three strings would be interesting. I think violin is a good option, but something similar to a guitar or small harp would be even better.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle 😭😭😭
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hybridlore and Ellette Giselle are now friends 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@jonas By the way, I also love the magic that Ilahna has. Super creative. And yes, violins can usually only play two strings at once, but it is slightly harder than playing one. You can play a brief chord on 2+ strings but it is staggered… if that makes sense, meaning you will technically only be playing two strings at one time. Idk if that…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted an update 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Happy November 1–National Authors Day!! @kyronthearcanin @ellette-giselle @freedomwriter76 @livingwoodchronicles @anyone-with-a-published-book
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Happy National Author’s Day to you!!!!!
Yippy! We get our own holiday and we didn’t even have to go to war to earn it.
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Take that back. We totally went to war. A war with words and the pen, which is mightery then the sword.
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‘Tis mightier indeed. And thanks 😅
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Ahem @freed_and_redeemed 🤣
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Happy Author’s Day to you as well!!! 💜✨
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Many who recalled that night would think to themselves that the sky was weeping.
If so, many wept with it.
Love this!
I’m interested to read more, even though I don’t really know much about it since I haven’t read most of the first book. I might have read an chapter or two. 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin Also. I have to go do school, so I may be MIA for a bit.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin We should probably take turns so it’s not confusing…? Loopy, you wanna go?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Sara —> Edge of Elderstrand with Marcel & Felicity
There must be a town nearby, we can go together since it’s dark.” The boy suggested, glancing over at Sara.
Before she could answer, branches rustled, and someone tumbled out of the forest bordering the city. “2094?! Did you hit your head? It’s 18…..” The person—a youn…[Read more]
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