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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Do you have any thoughts on the Prologue?
A little background information…
this is an allegory of spiritual warfare and the lies that we believe about ourselves, and how that affects our lives.
I’m not going to info dump everything right now cuz that would be a LOT! But I will answer any questions as you have them!
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
GIRL 😭
That’s so sweet of you. I would be honored 😭❤️
Okay!!! In the post above (where I answered Jonas) I posted the proposed acknowledgements page with your guys’ names in it!!!
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselel
“Yes, the Fossers live there,” replied Thaddeus.
He’s hiding something. He is most certainly hiding something. “Were you going to the Catacombs?” demanded Marcus.
“What business would I have there at this hour?” asked the boy, innocently.
“That’s what I would like to know,” replied Marcus.
“Why would I ever go there when it…
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
That’s so great! I know you were having some hard times recently, and it’s good to hear that you’re doing better!
Yeah…spiritual warfare is a real thing!!!!!!!! But now I can see that God is always fighting for me, and I’m never alone!!!
I didn’t feel like that at all! There was a point when I wasn’t able to keep up, but that was just…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
This is the one to my old account…idk if it will work or not xD
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Oh wait it said that it won’t let me message you because of your message settings 😭😭
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Tysm!!!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Pretty much all that came through
And all this time I thought that you never saw them lol 😳 oops my bad 🤣
Would it be alright if we did it through Pinterest?
I tried messaging you once…but my account is weird…it won’t let me message people because of my age! I can make a fake account so that it will finally let me do normal stuff xD…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
You read all those?!?!?
Pretty much all that came through 😀
That’s okay! Please, please, let me know when you get it published!
Dont worry! Ill let everyone know (:
I get it if you’re not comfortable sharing this, but would you mind if either I gave you my email or you gave me yours so we can talk sometimes? Again, no pres…
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Hi!! Ive missed you!!
Ah, that’s ok! As long as you’re happy. Forensic science is cool! What makes you kinda want to do that?
So I toured a high school and they had a forensic science booth, I told my Mom I thought it was super cool and shes going to buy the curriculum for it next year (I dont want to go to public high school yet XD) The…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The Chat Chat’s being weird…so I’ll just tell you here!
Hey dont worry about it! I always enjoy reading them 🙂
You read all those?!?!?
Lol! I know, it may just be a stage I’m going through, but at the moment I’m done.
That’s okay! Please, please, let me know when you get it published!
I get it if you’re not comfortable sharing thi…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Prologue
It was a dark night-clouds moving from the west blotted out any light from the twin moons, and tendrils of fog curled around the two lone figures drifting through the streets of Lir.
Sevyrn held the small bundle against her chest, shielding the young child from the bitter cold. She strained to hear the sound of his shallow breathing,…[Read more]
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Sara started the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m not going to tag anyone because that would be super annoying to be tagged TWICE!
BUT! Here is my new and improved novel…
I shall post the first chapter (it’s actually a prologue but whatever).
Feel free to contrast this with the first page of the old cringy page for my WIP and see the IMPROVEMENT! OH MY GOODNESS!
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Awww sad day :/ that’s okay though! You do whatever you feel is best for you, and what God is calling you too! I have missed you so much 💗💗💗💗💗💗 and I will continue to miss you!!!
❤️ ❤️ ❤️
And sorry for blowing up your email with always tagging you xD I just really missed you! I promise I won’t anymore if you don’t want me to lo…
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom (sorry to tag you again but this needs to be said)
Y’all….I just scrolled through the first 14 pages of this…
I owe you guys BIG TIME! Like you put up with me, a new, confused, emotionally unstable writer and helped me SOOOO MUCH! Words can’t describe how thankful I am that you three were there…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@ALLISON
YOU’RE BACK YOU’RE BACK YOU’RE BACKI DID NOT SEE THAT COMING OH MY GOODNESS WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE HOW HAPPY I AM RIGHT NOW
well I think I’m done with writing (for now, but who knows?)
Awww sad day :/ that’s okay though! You do whatever you feel is best for you, and what God is calling you too! I have missed you so much 💗💗💗💗💗💗 and I w…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @anyone
Hi guys!! Man, it’s been a long time since I’ve been on here 🙂 But yeah, lifes been… different? How are you doing? How’s your WIP’s?
About the Pinterest board, well I think I’m done with writing (for now, but who knows?). I was really thinking about it a few months ago and real…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@grcr @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @acancello (I’m still going to tag you until you come back) @anyone-else
See above post ⬆⬆⬆
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Okay…I’m going to make a new topic for my WIP because this one has 22 pages…and over half of them is SUPER CRINGY writing that I posted back in September/October! (My September/October writing was perhaps the worst I have ever written in my entire life….my Robin Hood Rip-Off that I wrote at 8 was better than…[Read more]
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