WalkByFaith

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter @everyone

Hey guys! How are you all doing?

@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @I hopeIgoteveyone

Hugo

Ottolines story was horrible, making Hugos seem simple in comparison. She had been through so much, for so long.

“You didn’t deserve that. No one would.” He said, a bit choked up.

Ottoline looked at the floor. He lost control and g…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Do you think that the Paynes of the labor camp would use names still, but perhaps only in hushed tones especially around Pythonos?

Yeah I think so.

 An issue that I’m beginning to see now however is that it still feels like there’s no continuity of characters. Who do the readers connect to? Once they get to know one set of char…

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@acancello @mineralizedwritings

Yeah I’m good with whatever 🙂

@freedomwriter76

🥰🥰🥰 great job, girl!!

@traiblazer

KP ate my original post where I had put all the ages of the McKinleys and so I had to hurry and redo it. So I must have forgotten to put Esther’s age, but she’s seven like @grcr said.

@trailblazer

They’re both still young though, so any romance between them would have to stay pretty light and not get too serious until they’re a little older. Bennett also is going to the army when he turns 17 or 18, but depending how their relationship would play out, they could write letters to each other and such.

I know you also said Tin…

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@grcr @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer

Okay guys, sorry I’m late, but meet the McKinleys!

Reuben McKinley

He’s 45, with blue eyes and blonde hair. He’s very kind and loves to talk with people. He’s one of those parent’s who’ll stay hours at church talking with other parents! He’s good looking and muscular.

Ada McKinley

She’s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer @grcr @everyone

Okay guys…sorry I’m late, but meet the McKinleys!

Reuben McKinley

45 years old, 6’3. He’s easygoing and friendly, very easy to talk to. He’s one of those parents that will stay at church for hours chatting it up. He has blue eyes and blonde hair, good looking and muscular.

Ada McK…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer @grcr @everyone

Sorry guys, I’m super late! Anything important that I missed that I should know before I make my “family”?

@euodia-vision

Thank you! I followed you back 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

It would be kind of cool if someone was talking over them and guiding them the whole time, and at the end, reveal themselves, but a talking house is pretty cool also!  😀

I dont know how that whole thing popped up, but its kind of cool? Hope it still works!

@esther-c @starshiness @smiley @grcr @euodia-vision @janellebelovedpig @savannah_grace-2009 @highscribeofaetherium @anyone whos intrested!

This forum is a little old, but I figured we can still ise it 🙂 . But, I finally have started getting into Pintrest (Posting wise. I always loved making boards!) You can follow me if you want and I would love…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I have thought about what you said about the problems with Ottoline’s character, and have decided on a few new things about her history. I was thinking that instead of just the “laboratory”, that they take the Paynes to a work camp to build tools and new technology. Then if they become sick, or get out of line, then the Pythonos…[Read more]

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @grcr

Ottoline

She knew that he was waiting for her to tell him her story. They all were. Her first instinct was to shove the memories away. But he had been vulnerable and shared his. And so she began.

Letting go of his hand, just for a moment, she brought her shaking hands…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

That is so good! (Quick question: Is the house itself talking or dose someone have a hidden speaker or something like that?)

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer

Hugo 

Ottoline found him within minutes. She did really care for him, his eyes must have made her feel sorry for him. No, he didn’t want anyone to feel sorry for him. Ever.

He sat down by the pillar and tried to stop the tears as she came over, but it was…[Read more]

@smiley

I love it! Especially Hannah 😀

@freedomwriter76

That’s so sad and sweet at the same time!❤️

@keilah-h

thanks!