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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Nahim
Nahim unclipped his sword as something screeched. He turned on his heel, seeing a black shape disappear farther into the bushes. He plunged after it, bent over a little bit to avoid branches that slapped against his armored chest and bare face. He couldn’t tell if he was gaining on the thing, or not. He activated his sword, the green glow…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Glace
“You will explain it to me!” Glace was at Klethen’s throat, lifting him up and slamming him to the wall. Klethen kicked and thrashed, his hands at his throat trying to pry Glace’s fingers away, but Glace wouldn’t budge.
“I have killed armies of people like you by myself. I’ve approached an entire legion, weaponless, and slain them all, by…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Sure!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Nahim
Nahim paced thoughtfully at the edge of the fire light, not wishing to go to sleep. Dathaln was tethered to a nearby tree, with a long enough rope that he could graze. Nahim kept his hand on his hip, near where hung his sword. If he had to, he would pace there all night, undisturbed. Anything to keep any strange creatures and his nightmares away.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ohhhh. Okay. You’re fine!
Ottoline
“What happened?” she said again. She felt herself growing stronger by the second as if some strange power was mending her injuries.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
IT’S SO SAD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@thearcaneaxoim
True. I’m not sure the best way to put this then.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ottoline wasn’t saying that she wasn’t lucky they had magic. She was saying that she felt better and would be fine, and didn’t even know they were using magic. Sorry, I’m just kind of confused by Ellis’s RP lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ottoline
“Oh,” she frowned. “I’ll live.” she shrugged. “I’ve been through worse.” She laughed as if a joke, but several people looked at her with concerned expressions on their faces.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
His headache is probably better, because I think it’s been a day or so since the scene with the fire.
Yes, but even though its days after, my research says with a severe TBI, and not resting, he would be seeing months of symptoms. Apparently, veterans often take longer to recover TBI’s than civilians. Needless to say, Nahim is still fig…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ottoline
Pain.Â
With every pulse of her blood, her head ached. Her shoulder throbbed with pain so deep that she felt herself slipping away….She didn’t want to wake up…she didn’t want to feel the pain anymore….
And suddenly, it wasn’t there anymore.
Her eyes fluttered open to reveal a number of concerned faces.
“What? Huh?” she looked…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Would ya charries like to meet a good ol’ mormaka, downscaled?
Imagine a heat hating, ice hating monster with highly acidic saliva, large teeth, horny head (kinda like a bewilderbeast from httyd, just a little different) the approx body shape of a triceratopsian, but with three large claws on it’s feet. Long, strong tail with a knobby…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I think Nahim still has his headache, right? He got a severe concussion, rested but is not resting, and never submitted himself to be healed. Yeah, he’s got a headache.
BTW, I purposefully created that plot tool with Fennin freaking out and thinking Lillen’s old enemies had entered Lillen. If the stakes don’t appear high enough, and we want more…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Wild mustang or calm Lusitano? Answer me! Nih, I know the answer, wild mustang. You, my friend, have had a taste of a real equestrian expierance, but ya look at it wrong.
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Glace
Glace spun araround, looking at Klethen.
“Them? Explain yourself! You gave fear.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Klethen! I suggest you learn about an animal before you decide to hate it! I’ve met horses that would plain out be awfully embarrassed if ya fell off, so much so they take it easy on ya. I’ve met horses who you could walk under and they wouldn’t care. Dumb sometimes, yes. Little brats sometimes, yes. Wild in the field, yes.…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ah, but, bud, I wonder what ranch pony ya ride. A wild mustang or a calm Piroutteing Lusitano? One with a double twirl (I think that’s what it’s called) or a kind, brown eye?
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Klethen is so sweet! Though, bud, ya gotta work on that hatred for ponies. Ever seen their cute wild eyes?!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Wait. Now I’m thinking about it more, and since everyone knows that the Pythonos take the children away, then he wouldn’t think that his parents threw him away.
Maybe he just sees himself as worthless because of what the Pythonos do to the Paynes? Like you said, he can’t shake the feeling that somehow he deserved what the…[Read more]
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