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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Omc where do you find all these quotes? I love them!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Oops I forgot to mention that I deleted the scene with her not wanting to talk to the Great One…so now it’s just the scene with her and Lilitu pretending to be animals.
I really liked it so I put it into the “scene recycling bin” if I need it again, but for now it’s not in the draft.
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
I can’t wait for the 11th now to give all of you my thoughts! These are all so great!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
@everyone
Sixth Chapter!!!
Chapter 6
A Voice
Lir stretched out as far as the eye could see-the crown jewel of Andromeda, the pride of the Pythonos.
Sef stood on the hilltop, overlooking the city, taking in the sights and smells as if she were starving, though she knew she’d never be able to partake in the beauty of it all.
Paynes w…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
I honestly don’t know XD
Here’s the link you can use (but there’s not a lot of “new chapters”…and the first couple “new” chapters need a lot of redoing, but you can read ahead if you want! Just keep in mind that if you critique them, I’ve seen a lot of the problems already. The new chapters I’m talking about are…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
I just found THE BEST Christian singer ever…her name’s Hannah Barr! Pleeaaasssseee look her up!
My favorites are: Miss Independence, P31, I Am, The Search, You Were There. But I really love ALL her songs, she’s amazing! <3 -
Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
That reminds me @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h
Are you guys still in this rp, or have you decided to drop out?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Why is it every time I read one of your rps I laugh so hard that I start crying?
Also, i know some kids in class tripped my poor Chase twice, but I don’t think we’ve officially added any bullies. Though the math teacher…does she count?
Um, me, Whaley, Loopy’s taking a break, Esther, Sara, Freedom is currently not in any rps, Keilah…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
“Nope, still not lost. Just temporarily misplaced the destination.”
“Left! Left! Left!…your other left!”
“Skilled enough to take it apart Patient enough to put it back together Smart enough to hide the extra parts when I’m done”
Three Krogen quotes right there! LOL Cgecko needs to see this!
Totally can see someone saying…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Wait really??!!!! I want to read that!!! I love capture scenes. Especial if the badguys are really mean and the hero still doesn’t lose his head. all though, from what I’ve seen of Nahim………
He does pretty well in the beginning, but then Vorgan uses Nahim’s greatest fear to break him. It’s the darkest hour in my book, and I haven’t…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
Decided I was going to take a break from KP yesterday, because the plot of my WIP needed fixing and stuff but I think I fixed it so, I’ll be around until next time I get upset about how awful my writing is.
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You’re writing’s NOT awful! I’ve always admired you and your style and passion for it!
And don’t put pressure on yourself to be perfect.
Also remember your identity is in Christ, and He gives you the gift of writing! When I get stuck, I pray about it, and then the words and plot just come to me.
But girl I know how rough it is…you get…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
Bye
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I figured out my problem, so I’m going to be still here. I know I was only gone 15 hours but I needed the mindset I guess to actually get stuff done.
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WHAT YOU WERE GOING TO LEAVE?!?! huh girl whattttt?
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Temporarily, not like forever. I just had a bit of a realization that my WIP makes no sense, and I got really stressed out. So, I was going to take a break for like a month or so, but then I got over it. It was nothing
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Ohhh haha
It’s okay cuz my WIP doesn’t make any sense either…I’ve been there and I know how stressful that is XD XD-
DON’T SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@anyone else who’s read Nahim is bad at guns
I take it back!
So, I was doing some research stuff this afternoon, ya know, adding more suspicious stuff to my search history, and finally looked up how to correctly write a sword fight, cuz I’ve been avoiding those since I’m really bad at fight scenes. During my quest for…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
One, Mandin said it would take Nahim several minutes to defeat an opponent with a sword. Exchanges with swords actually usually last for a handful of seconds.
I know that, you know that, Nahim knows that, but Mandin? Sure, he probably does, but he’s trying to make a point. He’s been attempting to get Nahim into guns for a…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Livia
“I’m an Aquino,” she shrugged. “I was born with it.”
She formed a miniature waterspout over her hands and watched it whirl, then letting it fall into a small puddle at her feet.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Don’t think I’ve posted this before, but have been wanting to.It’s the beginning scenes for Black Wolf, Green Eyes, Chase’s second novel idea. If you don’t know, Chase is a young man by now.
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 I have a Chase scene you may or may not have seen before
“You boys have five minutes to finish before we head out ag…
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
i like the story idea, but the tech level sounds to much like our time. I don’t get that sci-fi vibe from it.
Any books, movies, CDs, pictures, letters, or anything that in the least way suggested something that we don’t agree with will be
CD’s should not be mentioned. By 2065, those will be as unheard of in a household as c…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I’ll post more scenes if I find any good ones.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk
Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.
Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…
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I am now a fan 😆
REALLY?!?!
YESSSSSS LET’S GO!!!!
What are your favorites???
Hmm… *contemplates for way too long*
P31, I Am, Calling, You Were There, and Like Me, I think.
Those are all sooooo good!!!!!!!!
Have you heard Wait For You, or HQME, or LOML? Elias is soooo sad it almost made me cry!!!!
Haha I was just about to say that I forgot about HQME. LOML is also really good.
I know! That one was really sad 🥺
Haha! I love how she has so many different styles, like rap (sort of), upbeat, worship, country/Christian, and also really sad songs to cry to XD