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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay, Tlavian it is! XD why are you so good at this!?!?!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
I actually do show a scene of the kids working in the next chapter, and then a couple chapters after that…just wait XD
Okay, good ideas!
I just don’t know how to reveal it all…because those ideas sound so good but when I try to do stuff like that it feels either rushed or too slow 😭😭😭 I’ll figure it out somehow lol
And…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Chase
Chase looked at her shyly out of the corner of his eye. “I-it’s g-good.” He faced Sef again, his eyebrows growing close together as he concentrated. The color of his eyes warped and somewhat faded away, forming into the picture of a woman with curly brown hair down to her shoulders, a pretty smile and green eyes. “T-that’s her.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @thesahdow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings
Here are my thoughts and my judging!
Ellette: When I first saw your drawing, my immediate thought was “This is gonna be hard to beat.” You portrayed the hair and the soft features really nicely. You did put the scale on the wrong side, and…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you sooo much, do you have any thoughts/ comments??? I’d love to hear them!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay great!!!
I guess some of both? Like what the Andromedans would call Him, as well as new names for what the humans could call Him?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you soooo much!!! <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@anyone-who-wishes-to-read
Chapter 7
Rage
Pain.
A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.
On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.
Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.
Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
you want an em dash instead of a hyphen
Noted. Thank you!!!
Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?
She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Sef
“You’re like my mom.”
She caught Chase staring, and giggled.
“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?”
She stroked the bird with her finger again.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @anyone-else-who-was-going-to-enter
Just so you know, I will be giving my thoughts and pronounce the winner between 10-12 today by EST time. If you are going to post your drawings, plz do it before then. If for some reason you can’t post them before that time today, just let me know and I’ll postpone my judging…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Your welcome 🙂
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Ruth replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
“Sorry, my Bible has ads.” -someone at my church
She was using a Bible app on her phone at evening service
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
I’ve been playing with a new art style and got bored this afternoon, so I decided to draw Leon and Riker. Hope you like it!

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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Relax.
I’m not gonna judge anything until a little before noon on Thursday. If you can’t finish it by tomorrow, don’t sweat, you have until Thurs.
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@theshadow @keilah-h @princesachronicle22
Silvanis
Once he saw the creature, Silvanis instinctively pushed Fairy behind him. When she tried to step past him, he pushed her back, a pale glow coming to his right hand.
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