@trailblazer
Active 1 day, 5 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Alrighty, I’m adding my second character… My boy Flazzy (just forget his last name for now…)
Flaz is 15 years old and stands 5 foot tall. His jet-black hair is shaved on one side of his head, and it always looks shiny in the moonlight. He has sandy beige skin, a button nose, and naturally pinkish lips. His monolid eyes have a…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
No, that’s fine!
@acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @rae @esther-c
Ottoline
Safe.
Ottoline never thought that she would use that word to describe her current state of being, but here she was.
Hugo held her close to his side as they watched the stars through the window. It was peaceful. She couldn’t believe that a mere 24 h…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr @rae @esther-c
If you do that, I think I’ll join. My character would just arrive separately though. If people don’t want to change this RP, we could just start Rae’s idea as a separate one.
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr @rae @esther-c
Do you guys want me to make them all transfer to the other world Rae was talking about?
Or does someone else want to? I’m fine with either XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 1 month ago
Wow, your posts are great! I only read one but you’re very talented!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 1 month ago
Thank you!! Yeah, Wix does have that! I don’t know about designing your own background, I had a little bit of trouble with that too but was able to figure the header out. Euodia knows a ton about it, tho! 😁
It did! I like it, yeah. I’ve used blogger in the past so Wix was a little hard to figure out but euodia helped me as well, so I…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c @grcr @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @everyone!
=-=–=-=-Hugo=-=-=-=
Hugo Searched everywhere for Ottoline. Under the tables, around the food buffet, around all the dancers, and finally, finally, he saw her coming out of the basement, holding hands with Hedieh.
“Ottoline!” He cried out in relief, “where were…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Yeah…I guess we did kinda get WAY off topic…(which I don’t mind, lol) but when we get back on track I’ll tag you, haha
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@trailblazer @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings
Aww guys you’re so sweet! Thanks! <3
I don’t have in person friends, what you see here on kp is about what I have aside from my sister, who I’m pretty close with. And yeah it’s super scary but guess what I just talked to somebody today 😝 and she wasn’t a family member, and I recognized her from my…
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Yep! It was really fun, I have never been to one either and decided to give it a shot and was so glad I did! We learned about 6 different, simple dances and I tried to do the “Cotton-eye Joe” But couldn’t, 😀
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Hi!! I’m so sorry I haven’t been on in forever (Maybe its only been like 3 days, but still a long time 🙂 ) So… I have been crazy, crazy busy. Like, I even went to my first barn dance in my new town and there were almost 100 high schoolers🤯 Personally I love to hang out with people so I went without knowing anyone :D…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @esther-c
I will not allow this RP to die!!!!
haha
who wants to write the next RP?
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Is this better?
“Last night, I had a dream…” Lilitu began. They stopped walking in a clearing. “I saw this girl…” he shook his head. “She was crying. She looked so sad, and hopeless…And it was so vivid. I could feel her pain, her suffering, and there was nothing I could do.” His voice was strained. Is he crying? Sef wonde…
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Ofc! I love stories with that kind of friendship…makes me miss my best friend, lol.
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @grcr @rae @mineralizedwritings
Ottoline
“Ottoline! Where are you?” Hugo’s voice echoed down the stairwell. His voice contained some sort of urgency. “Ottoline!” She heard his footsteps coming down the stairs. “There you are,” he sighed when he saw her and smiled his crooked smile that never failed to make…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
“I don’t want to lose you.” I was surprised to see tears welling in Etta’s eyes.
Aww, I love their friendship! This almost made me cry XD
I agree with Hybridlore, I don’t think the summary-type writing is a bad thing. It fits great with this story!
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Yeah, it does end abruptly. I really don’t like this chapter, lol. I guess….more EDITING! SO MUCH FUN!!!! (not.)
Maybe something like that? I mean, Lilitu already described what happened, sort of, and I feel like it gets a little graphic in the actual flashback part. But it’s really up to you, if you feel l…
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Yayy! Looks good! I don’t mind the summary kind of telling, I think it works well for this story.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 (Ok, awesome!) @grcr @rae @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @acancello
Hedieh
As Hedieh twirled around the room with Amir, she couldn’t help but smile. This was so much fun. As the music slowly stopped, Hedieh sighed and let her hands fall to her sides. “You caught on pretty quickly.”
“That doesn’t mean it w…[Read more]
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