Trailblazer

@ellette-giselle
Wow, it looks great!! Thank you so much!!!

@anyone-who-wishes-to-read

Chapter 7

Rage

Pain.

A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.

On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.

Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.

Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]

@jonas

you want an em dash instead of a hyphen

Noted. Thank you!!!

Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?

She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Let me think….yEs PlEaSe HeLp Me 😭😭😭

If you’re busy though, that’s fine no worries!

@rae

Sef

“You’re like my mom.”

She caught Chase staring, and giggled.

“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?”

She stroked the bird with her finger again.

@calyhuge

Sounds great XD I’m kinda excited!!!

@rae

Omc I’m so sorry…give me a second…I forgot AND I’ve been on a break for four days :/

@rae

OH.

MY.

GOODNESS!!! 💖🤩🥹😭

They are SO FREAKING ADORABLE!!! Oh my goshhhhhhh. And someone drew MY characters while they were bored??🥹🥹

Oh my goodness

Thank youuuuuuuu💖💖💖

You just made my day 🥰🥰🥰

@ellette-giselle

Wow, it looks awesome!

@ellette-giselle

Oh, wow, awesome! I didn’t know you could do that 😅. It sounds really interesting! Okay, I’ll let you know if I decide to!

What is it called?

@ellette-giselle Thank you! 💖 And I’m soooo looking forward to it!! ✨✨

Reference #2

(OH, and you can include an earring like the one above in this image too if you would like as well)

Reference #1

Dress on the right (blue), but pink and more just solid color without any dots

@ellette-giselle I love the beard!! You did a great job! ✨✨

Sure, I can send a request in! I’ll have you draw a female character this time, but maybe still in black and white. I just love it so much😂 and then they’ll all be a common theme of black and white, so😉🥰

Name: Aadelheide Mary Wagner

Age: 23

Gender: Female

Clothing: Pink 1940s era…[Read more]

Because one thing I want to show, especially through Riker and definitely especially through Leon, is that when you become a Christian and accept Christ, accept God, accept everything that comes with being a Christian, that doesn’t mean you’re just going to miraculously be healed of everything you’ve been through

I know people that still have to…[Read more]

Maybe Leon and Riker (prob esp Leon) while in the USA have both been avoiding people, places, things, etc. that trigger their PTSD, but with the return to Germany it brings a lot of things back and they both have to work through those things that yeah, haven’t healed yet

But both of my Boys are stubborn and don’t like to admit where they’re…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I really do understand what you mean about external conflict though

Def the 1st book had the conflict with all of the war things, all of the antagonists, resistance, etc

The 2nd book has external conflict mostly involving tension between people, alcoholism (for Leon), fights, acted upon hatred, etc

Like how in the second book,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I’ve actually heard a lot of authors say internal is harder, and I don’t understand it 😂 External is sooooo much harder for me. It wasn’t as hard in the 1st book, but Hans was a huge contributor to that

@whalekeeper

lol, you’re good. Ik you don’t know my book as well, so you’re fine XD Def noted what you said about external…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Oh my goodness!!!! 😍😍 I love him!!!!!!!!! Ty so much!!! <3

@ellette-giselle

Congratulations on publishing your novel! Is it through Amazon, or what? What’s it about?

Okay, awesome! Thanks!