Trailblazer

@rae

Why did you have to make is so saddd?! 😭

(That’s such a rhetorical question. XD)

Yeah, I think the pictures went to the music well and I didn’t mind the repetition. I think the only thing that wasn’t the best was the color of the words. I liked the font, but I felt like with some of pictures it was hard to read.

But that’s all. And whe…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It just occurred to me that they’ve known each other for less than a day…. 😐 😂

Lukas

He tried to make his laugh sound casual, only succeeding in a voice crack— again. He cleared his throat and steadied himself. “Yeah…”

I’m not sure how to make Xandro find them, so you can do that if you want.

@trailblaer @savannah_grace2009 @rae @whoever-else

I’m sticking around for sure, just not sure what charries I want to put in. Agh! It’s so hard to chooseee XD

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!! He’s so much fun to write 😉

@whalekeeper

Haha, I love that!! XD I try to make readers squeal often whenever I have an Everdala scene in my book.

@trailblazer

I think I’ll keep Ottoline. Since Marcurious wasn’t here originally I don’t think I’ll keep him.

@esther-c

That’s so cute! I love Ev <3

@rae

It was so sweet! <333

hopefully there aren’t more weird errors in that… i’m scared of editing it a third time…

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CHAPTER IV

Belle walked along the garden pathway in a queen-like manner. Her hourglass figure was dressed down in a purple mermaid dress. Her dress sparkled and glimmered in the morning sun, and gold earrings dangled from her small ears—complimenting gold necklace sat around her neck. She was radiant and m…[Read more]

@rae

Oh my gosh…girl…. XD you have a problem

INTERVENTION!

jk, jk, lol

@esther-c

You’re good XD

@rae

oh, don’t worry, I’ll tag you once I begin spamming Jonas with dragon pics!

Oh that’s a relief.

@rae

That was very pretty and sad!! I really like it. 💛💛

I think you put the pics to the music good.

Ok, so… I wasn’t expecting the repetition at first, but then I caught onto it and it was pretty enjoyable. 😄

Oh yeah.. I’m with Janessa XD

If anything hilarious happens, make sure to tag me, lol

I’ll stick to the party one.

@trailblazer

Maybe the House just put them in a simulation to intimidate them or something?

@esther-c

OH NO WE FORGOT ABOUT XANDRO!!!!!

If you want…you can RP Xandro finding them, or I can too.