Trailblazer

@jonas

Yeah, that’s happened to me too before!

@thearcaneaxiom

I like it! Thing is my favorite, lol. I don’t think you should change the name even though it’s a little mean, but it’s up to you. I think it fits her and she likes it, so it works.

The plot is a little confusing to me… a lot of the philosophy/science stuff goes over my head but that’s fine, lol. Anyway, nice job so far! I…[Read more]

@rae

Okay, phew! Finally caught up. And yeah, Chapter 7 isn’t showing up for me… so I guess I’m not, lol.

The biggest things I noticed were again, really long paragraphs. I think it would be easier to read if you split them up, but it’s up to you.

And long sections of dialogue without tags, like this:

“You can…”

“Read, write, and speak i…

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@jonas

Okay, I actually don’t think I’ll join… Thanks, though!

@jonas

Oh yeah that’s happened to me before. Idk why. 🤷🏻‍♀️ If I have to edit a post, I’ll just edit it, copy it, then submit the edit just in case it deletes.

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!!

Plotting isn’t always easy for me, so that’s encouraging to hear. 😊

I’ll try to get to writing a RP later today, but I’m not sure if that will happen. 😅 I haven’t gotten to it this week because life has been pretty busy. 🙃

@jonas

lol 😂

@jonas

Alrighty! 😅

@jonas

(you’re welcome!! 😄)

Yeah, I was thinking it might be cool if they had to journey a bit before they got there. The house could tell them how to get there.

Mmm, good idea. *thinks of all the annoying things Flaz might say while on the journey*

My character isn’t at the house though, so everyone else can do whatever they want. Maybe my c…

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@jonas

Alrighty! He sounds pretty cool!! 😄 (And so does Conviction)

So where is the house now? I know it transported them across worlds, but where, geographically, is it? I would assume it is somewhere near a city, since they were transported there to help the queen?

Hmm… near a city would make sense… or even possibly near her castle (or…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I don’t really know… lol… I don’t think anything is known so we’ll probably have to make it up as we go…

@savannah_grace2009

Aww thanks 😊 He’s one of my favorite characters

@grcr

I love Flaz! His personality is just…awesome!

@mineralizedwritings

😅 So… They’ve already done the dance… (I don’t know if they are going to continue any bit more…)

The Queen of Lillen (I think??) has told them that they have been transferred to the new universe/country/world… but she hasn’t said much else. The house has moved everyone already, and they are still trying to figure out…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Thank you!!

@trailblazer

I’ll check out your past posts and try to come up with some ideas!

@trailblazer

lol 😅 yeah

Alright… my “minute” turned into quite a while… anyhow… Flaz is going to enter now….

Flaz

“Clothes and clothes and more clothes. Who, in the wondrous and ridiculous world of Extroit, has a wardrobe this large?” Flaz said loudly as he stepped out from under a rack in the basement. He made a weird sound as his round face brushed up…[Read more]

@acancello

Thank you! <3