@trailblazer
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
Let me know if any of this needs to be fleshed out more (or if it moves too fast and there should be more specific scenarios).
Things are about to get dicey…
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Come spring, many changes occurred. The first was Bert Hawley asking Pa for Clara’s hand in marriage. The wedding was planned for June, and Clara w…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, I think Lane was 14.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Kari is 16, but her age doesn’t really matter that much.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Kari can swim, and she’s been trained as a lifeguard, but she hasn’t had experience in freezing water.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
That sounds like a good idea. If we can get our characters to stay out of trouble, maybe each group can give an update on what they’ve accomplished.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Honestly I don’t know where else to take the scouting scene so we can just leave that a little more obscure if we have to and keep things moving along.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @jonas @rae
I guess I’m pretty boring, lol. The only pets I’ve ever had were fish, and most of them didn’t stick around long. Bubbles was a goldfish who made it to the extraordinary age of two months before departing this world. (I think two months was the longest any of my goldfish lasted. I had one that only made it three…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
That sounds rough!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Lol
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
We’ll inevitably go down another bunny trail sometime anyway so it’s probably not worth it.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Maybe we need to create/move to a different chat so we don’t bog this one down lol.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah sometimes I wonder about the stuff they use to color food….
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
It was something with the dye I think.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I knew of someone who was allergic to crayons, but never acrylic yarn.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium
I just hop on here and we’re talking about cats and cashews?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah that’s helpful. I guess the other thing is, are they sending Lillenings out as scouts, or trying to do the scouting themselves? The first option is probably going to be easiest and quickest.
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