@trailblazer
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I love that! I want to hear more of the story! Is this all from your personal experience or did you add some parts?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Kari
As smoke filled the dining hall, Kari couldn’t see very well what was happening around her. Everything had erupted in chaos, and she was not prepared to fight. Backing into an obscure corner, she began praying for help. What could she use to fight? Glancing down at the ground, she noticed a knife lying near her feet. It must have ended up on…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Depending on the prompt, I might join in, too. It sounds fun!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Just don’t kill Fennin too or our charries will never get home.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae @savannah_grace2009 @beth-torres
Well now I’m finally caught up and everyone else has to go lol.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium
Do you know how strange this entire story would sound to someone who hasn’t been a part of it? A group of youth get locked into a house that talks to them and forces them to have a masquerade ball, and then they get sucked into another world by a queen who wants them to fight off dragons. The odds are stacked…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @rae @freedomwriter76 @anyone else
Almost just tagged myself by mistake lol.
Hudson
“Material possessions mean a great deal to many people,” Hudson observed. “Perhaps it won’t hurt her too badly to realize that life is more than the expensive articles she can collect.”
Before Reuben could reply, Mr. Baumann re-entered the…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Trailblazer started the topic Recent Topics page is down in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 2 months ago
The recent topics page hasn’t been working for the past two days. I don’t know if that’s something you need to fix or if it eventually resolves itself.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I don’t usually have the problem of running into people older than me on here, lol. Probably because most people out of high school don’t have time to be on KP much. I’ve found that even in person I tend to gravitate towards people my age or younger for friends, but I do have a few who are older than me.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
It’s a whole thing… Rae will randomly start filling up the Character Party chat with pictures of dragons.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
Here’s the next part:
May was an unusually dry month, drier than any I’d seen before. Pa and Mama were fearful of fires, always exercising caution when cooking. Any wayward spark from the chimney could catch the dry brush and start an inferno.
On a Sunday afternoon, shortly after we’d finished planting, Mam…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
OK, thanks for the input! Maybe I’ll just write a couple scenes in Etta’s POV and see what happens… I wouldn’t have to keep them as part of the story, but maybe it would be helpful to see some of my characters from a different set of eyes.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@every0ne
Maybe Carrie should join first before we move forward. What were the characters doing last?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I think you should keep her in! Kari hasn’t had a lot of conflict with other characters in this RP so it might be fun to make some confusion. I feel like it could go two ways- either the girls bond over their names and have fun confusing people, or they get annoyed at each other and butt heads.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
I just had this thought: what if I added Etta’s POV to the whole story? Like switching back and forth between Libbie and Etta’s perspectives? I think it would be fun, and might help develop some of the side characters better, but it also might make things more confusing, and for simplicity’s sake might be better…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Ooh, this could be fun! Imagine all the confusion that can be caused with their names lol.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
Let me know if any of this needs to be fleshed out more (or if it moves too fast and there should be more specific scenarios).
Things are about to get dicey…
1886
Come spring, many changes occurred. The first was Bert Hawley asking Pa for Clara’s hand in marriage. The wedding was planned for June, and Clara w…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, I think Lane was 14.
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