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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
I’m available if anyone wants to write with me? @anna-brie, @daeus, @lightningmouse
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
I could do it tomorrow anywhere from 1:30-3:30 pm EST.
@daeus We will still be asleep then, if I have figured this out right. Your 1:00pm will be our 4:00am. I know, we sleep sooooo late. 😀 So I guess for us Aussies, we’ll just have to play it be ear and see if anyone is awake when we are. (*Bother different time zones*)
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
Oh and one other thing, when you post something, look at the time. That is American not ours. See my last post was 10:25pm yet it is 1:26pm our time.
@daeus, I don’t know how you’re still awake?!? I so need sleep. (I love sleeping in… 🙂 ) -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@anna-brie How about we start at 2:00pm (aus) 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
No problem at all. We can try tomorrow. (Sleep well tonight. 😀 )
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@aratrea If you have the time, I’ve love your feedback with the rest of the story. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Battle Power in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 8 months ago
This just keeps making me think of Prince Caspian and the underground fight. That scene is done so well, with Caspian and Peter counting. Maybe there is something there that will help.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Limericks in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
There once was a lizard called Ted.
Who lived in an old tin shed.
His head was dark blue,
And his tail was too,
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BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
“Wren?” I was stunned. “Wren, like the bird?”
“Yes.”
“Oh.” I thought I might have had a better name then that. Still I can vaguely remember liking it.
“Dad use to called me his Jenny Wren,” I cry, triumphantly.
Gavin nods and smiles.
“I’m starting to remember,” I crow.
“Good,” said Gavin.
“Now what?” I ask.
Gavin looks at me.
“What? Am I suppose…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
Or even 0:45 – 0:60?
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BlueJay posted an update 8 years, 8 months ago
Let your light so shine before men, that they may see your good works and glorify your Father in heaven. Matthew 5:16
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
Sounds like fun @lightningmouse. Do you want to try it for 15min with me? Maybe from 0:35 – 0:50?
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
Oops. Try you again. @cahndida-serkhaman
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
oops. Try you agian. @cahndida-serkhaman
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
Question: (@spradlin, @daeus, @cahndida serkhaman, @jadamae, @sarah-h)
If you were illustrating this for a child, how would you illustrate this verse.In a land long ago,
When men were all bad,
They stole and they murdered,
Which made the Lord sad.I obviously don’t want to scare them, with people killing people, but I don’t want to make the…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@spradlin Come and check this poem out. What do you think?
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
*blanches* raspberry!?! How can you eat those? (I can’t eat blackberries either. I do like blueberries and strawberries though.)
Thank you. Now, an illustrator….. (or not! 😛 ) -
BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
I try to tag you and get it wrong! @daeus Try that instead. 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
OK. So I’ve been working hard on this poem. I have added some more stanzas in case it does become a book. So the targeted audience is young children. With that in mind what do you think?
I’ll tag you just so you do see it @deaus. 😀In a land long ago,
When men were all bad,
They stole and they murdered,
Which made the Lord sad.He said,…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@anna-brie do you want to start with half an hour with me?
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