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BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@faithdk thanks for dropping in. 🙂 I think I’ll end up putting a tree in, just because it is a story for children. I might make it a bit easier for a child to visualize.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Awwwwww…..thanks @kate-flournoy you just made my day. *wipes happy tears with a tissue*
Do you think she needs a tree near the house to get down? I know cats can drop and land on their feet, but would it be better for her to climb down? Would that be nicer for a child to hear/read? -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Congrats. That’s a great idea. Maybe I should do that too…
@kate-flournoy I know, I’m so relieved to have solved it. Head back to the topic at the missing cats and tell me if my idea would work. (and you too @daeus) -
BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
With much thinking of myself as a cat 🙂 I have decided that the attic is the best option. So this is how it works.
Matt takes a load of empty boxes to the attic and leaves the door open. Missy, curious cat, enters and when Matt returns he doesn’t see her due to the boxes. He dumps the next load and shuts the door. Missy is trapped. But a small…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy and @daeus I got lots done. I’m not sure how many words exactly as I have been all over the place in my story but I got it all sorted out. I had some major problems in it. Time was the main issue, but that’s all done. *Very happy*
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BlueJay replied to the topic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
*the doctor arrives and groans loudly* @daeus you need to keep your hands away from @kate-flournoy. She gets very into the mood of stamping and slamming things and doesn’t look out for hands on paper.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
*Such a clever cat* I don’t think she’s that desperate to get out @daeus
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus I’m here. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
It’s suppose to be a children’s story. @daeus. Otherwise that might have worked. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@sarah-h. Nope no cat flap and I didn’t want to do that as in story 2 Chaos gets of the house that way.
@kate-flournoy – Haha yes I have read that book. So had Missy (the cat) so she decided it was safer not too. I like the one about the screen door. That is a big possibility. The house doesn’t have an attic.
@vanna The cat has got to be grown…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@sarah-h. Nope no cat flap and I didn’t want to do that as in story 2 Chaos gets of the house that way.
@kate-flournoy – Haha yes I have read that book. So had Missy (the cat) so she decided it was safer not too. I like the one about the screen door. That is a big possibility. The house doesn’t have an attic.
@vanna The cat has got to be grown…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
HELP! @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @faithdk, @anna-brie, @rolena-hatfield, @vanna, @sarah-h, @ivy-rose, @hope, @writefury, @anyone!!!!!
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BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@adry_grace The trouble is the family doesn’t leave. There is no mention of it. It is night time and their all tired, so I guessing they’d just go to bed.
I’ve been trying to think all night, but every time I come up with an idea, I end up knocking it back. 😛 -
BlueJay started the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Ok this is really embarrassing but I’ve got a major problem. I’m writing a story about a cat who gets lost. The family have just moved in to their new house, so it’s not unusual for a cat to go missing. They tend to try to get back to the old house. Don’t ask me why, but they do. *it’s a cat thing* But how did she get out of the house? She had…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
I don’t know if you’ve even read my two messages above, but I actually can’t write today. Tomorrow I should be able to though. Sorry about that. @anna-brie
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@anna-brie Or 2:30-3:00? 🙂 🙂 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
oops didn’t see this till now. What about from 2:25 to 2:55? Does that suit you? @anna-brie
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BlueJay replied to the topic How has your character changed? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
When I read the bit that you posted @adry_grace about Eon and Egypt, I thought of her as a love interest. 🙂 If that’s any help with deciding what to make her.
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BlueJay replied to the topic How has your character changed? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
When I read the you bit that you posted @adry_grace about Eon and Egypt, I thought of her as a love interest. 🙂 If that’s any help with deciding what to make her.
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BlueJay replied to the topic How has your character changed? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
When I read you bit that you posted @adry_grace I thought of her as a love interest. 🙂 If that’s any help.
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