TheShadow

@freedomwriter76

If you’ve written anymore…can you post it and tag me…plz?????

@jonas

Story Embers has some articles on plots, tried there?

I am contemplating a transition…

…choose whether or not to sacrifice themselves as well, or…

@jonas

Oh yeah, right.

@jonas

It’s fine, your’s was better. “split personalities????” where do I get this stuff XD

@jonas

I know. I was only mostly joking.

I think @acancello needs to make Hugo talk to Ottoline, and @rae might need to do a transition scene? Idk.

…having split personalities…

@jonas

Same…I would write one…but I kind of have to know what I’m talking about to write one, lol

I’m bored. WE NEED MORE CHAOS!!!!!!

@jonas

Sorry I couldn’t help more! Plotting is just really new to me….so it’s hard to give good advice XD

…that everyone must stay ten miles away from them, or else…

@jonas

The website says that the Hook is the inciting incident (so maybe I plotted wrong, XD). Apparently the First Plot Point is the point of no return, where your character takes action and there’s no going back. It’s the first significant event of the story.

@acancello

I will!!! I love them so much <3

…their brains disintegrate with how easy it is and they become…

@jonas

Hmm. Good question. I’m not exactly sure how to explain it, partly because I don’t understand it that well. But from what I understand, the Hook is what grabs the reader’s attention. Like in my story, for example, the “hook” would be when Neveah gives birth to Hanna. It disrupts Sef’s natural world, however, it doesn’t really force her to…[Read more]

….in caves in the mountains, along the streets, anywhere that makes surviving as hard as possible…

@acancello

This is all I’ve written in the next chapter:

The next morning, Lilitu walked out of his room, wearing actual clothes this time.

He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw Sef sleeping on the couch. Then all the memories from last night came rushing back. Why was she here? What had happened? Where were his parents?

Sef’s green hair f…

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