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@savannah_grace2009

Oh man! I must say creepy!

Goodness, it sure is good though. I really don’t like the decision the parents made. I mean, there’s just no excuse.

I’m excited to find out what happens to the child, though I have some educated guesses. Is this all you have written so far?

I did notice that you changed the wife’s name before…[Read more]

Oh man! I must say creepy!

Goodness, it sure is good though. I really don’t like the decision the parents made. I mean, there’s just no excuse.

I’m excited to find out what happens to the child, though I have some educated guesses. Is this all you have written so far?

I did notice that you changed the wife’s name before they joined the “Master”…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Do you have any thoughts on the Prologue?

A little background information…

this is an allegory of spiritual warfare and the lies that we believe about ourselves, and how that affects our lives.

I’m not going to info dump everything right now cuz that would be a LOT! But I will answer any questions as you have them!

@highscribeofaetherium

GIRL 😭

That’s so sweet of you. I would be honored 😭❤️

Okay!!! In the post above (where I answered Jonas)  I posted the proposed acknowledgements page with your guys’ names in it!!!

@ellette-giselel

“Yes, the Fossers live there,” replied Thaddeus.

He’s hiding something. He is most certainly hiding something. “Were you going to the Catacombs?” demanded Marcus.

“What business would I have there at this hour?” asked the boy, innocently.

“That’s what I would like to know,” replied Marcus.

“Why would I ever go there when it…

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OK, I have Chapter 3 ready to send. See if I broke up the dialogue in this one a bit better.

I don’t know if I love this chapter yet, so I’m open to thoughts. Now that I have y’all, I’m starting to really take a critical look at this book WHILE I’m writing it instead of after. It’s helpful to make changes now rather then at the end.

 
Chapter…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yay! I’m glad the second chapter was smoother.

Ah, I’ll keep that in mind. I was trying to portray that Ignatius just thought that Marcus was a scholar and was inquisitive. I guess I need to make that a little clearer. Thanks!

@savannah_grace2009

That’s an idea! I felt like the dialogue was a little tiresome near the end, but it…[Read more]

me trying to write literally anything

@jonas

That’s so great! I know you were having some hard times recently, and it’s good to hear that you’re doing better!

Yeah…spiritual warfare is a real thing!!!!!!!! But now I can see that God is always fighting for me, and I’m never alone!!!

I didn’t feel like that at all! There was a point when I wasn’t able to keep up, but that was just…

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This is the one to my old account…idk if it will work or not xD

@acancello

https://pin.it/2GVpm2ehq

@acancello

Oh wait it said that it won’t let me message you because of your message settings 😭😭

@esther-c

Tysm!!!

@acancello

Pretty much all that came through

And all this time I thought that you never saw them lol 😳 oops my bad 🤣

Would it be alright if we did it through Pinterest?

I tried messaging you once…but my account is weird…it won’t let me message people because of my age! I can make a fake account so that it will finally let me do normal stuff xD…[Read more]

@acancello

The Chat Chat’s being weird…so I’ll just tell you here!

Hey dont worry about it! I always enjoy reading them 🙂

You read all those?!?!?

Lol! I know, it may just be a stage I’m going through, but at the moment I’m done.

That’s okay! Please, please, let me know when you get it published!

I get it if you’re not comfortable sharing thi…[Read more]

Prologue

It was a dark night-clouds moving from the west blotted out any light from the twin moons, and tendrils of fog curled around the two lone figures drifting through the streets of Lir.

Sevyrn held the small bundle against her chest, shielding the young child from the bitter cold. She strained to hear the sound of his shallow breathing,…[Read more]

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom (sorry to tag you again but this needs to be said)

Y’all….I just scrolled through the first 14 pages of this…

I owe you guys BIG TIME! Like you put up with me, a new, confused, emotionally unstable writer and helped me SOOOO MUCH! Words can’t describe how thankful I am that you three were there…[Read more]