TheShadow

@whalekeeper Ok I’m still doing my break but I also want to write the roof scene so here

Lois

“Felicity… would you like to go somewhere after this and hang out together? Marcel offered to fly us to the roof.”

Felicity looked up from her drawing and smiled.“The roof? Yeah sure!”

Lois noted her lack of hesitation.

“Just us two,” he added.

“Sou…[Read more]

@everyone

Sixth Chapter!!!

Chapter 6

A Voice

Lir stretched out as far as the eye could see-the crown jewel of Andromeda, the pride of the Pythonos.

Sef stood on the hilltop, overlooking the city, taking in the sights and smells as if she were starving, though she knew she’d never be able to partake in the beauty of it all.

Paynes w…[Read more]

@esther-c

I honestly don’t know XD

Here’s the link you can use (but there’s not a lot of “new chapters”…and the first couple “new” chapters need a lot of redoing, but you can read ahead if you want! Just keep in mind that if you critique them, I’ve seen a lot of the problems already. The new chapters I’m talking about are…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Aww tysm girl that means a lot!!!

And so true!!!!!!

That reminds me @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h

Are you guys still in this rp, or have you decided to drop out?

@calyhuge

Why is it every time I read one of your rps I laugh so hard that I start crying?

Also, i know some kids in class tripped my poor Chase twice, but I don’t think we’ve officially added any bullies. Though the math teacher…does she count?

Um, me, Whaley, Loopy’s taking a break, Esther, Sara, Freedom is currently not in any rps, Keilah…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

“Nope, still not lost. Just temporarily misplaced the destination.”

“Left! Left! Left!…your other left!”

“Skilled enough to take it apart Patient enough to put it back together Smart enough to hide the extra parts when I’m done”

Three Krogen quotes right there! LOL Cgecko needs to see this!

Totally can see someone saying…[Read more]

and here’s another.

@grcr

I think the chapter was good! Intriguing.

Thanks! I’m glad!

I don’t really have any thoughts in a critical sense, and I’m not the best person to ask… but I do like it!

Oh that’s ok. I was more looking for general response as a reader, not so much critical  feedback as of yet. (though it’s always welcome.)

The last part was pretty sad to…

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@highscribeofaetherium

I finished up Esther’s drawing. If you have your character picked and ready I’d love to draw it.

@esther-c

Oh I’m so glad!! I wasn’t sure if they turned out the way you were hoping they would. I’m so glad they’re good!

@esther-c

Hi Esther,

I finished your characters, though I must say that this style is not my forte. I normally draw all my girls in dresses or skirts so this was a little new. I hope you like it. If not, I can try again. 🙂

@esther-c

Ok, here’s the first one.

@jonas @freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @rae

btw, anyone interested in taking a look at the character boards I just finished up?

@rae

He does pretty well in the beginning, but then Vorgan uses Nahim’s greatest fear to break him. It’s the darkest hour in my book, and I haven’t written it fully yet.

Ooooo, love it!!! YES YES YES!! You have to post that scene as soon as you write it!!

@ellette-giselle

Wait really??!!!! I want to read that!!! I love capture scenes. Especial if the badguys are really mean and the hero still doesn’t lose his head. all though, from what I’ve seen of Nahim………

He does pretty well in the beginning, but then Vorgan uses Nahim’s greatest fear to break him. It’s the darkest hour in my book, and I haven’t…[Read more]

@rae

Next chapter, Vorgan captures Nahim, and takes Nahim’s weapons.

Wait really??!!!! I want to read that!!! I love capture scenes. Especial if the badguys are really mean and the hero still doesn’t lose his head. all though, from what I’ve seen of Nahim………

As for the fight scene thing, it really does end in a few seconds. A fight that g…[Read more]