TheShadow

@freed_and_redeemed

*throwing a fit because I want more!!!!!*

ahhhhhhhhh!!!!! SOOOOOOO GOOOOOD!!!! I love it!

@freed_and_redeemed

Thanks. I’ll see what I can do.

@theshadow

Here is the next section.

“Aaron! Aaron, wait up!”

Aaron turned and saw his friend running down the road to catch up with him. “Hello Peter.”

“Aaron, what on earth is going on?” demanded Peter.

“What do you mean?” asked Aaron, leaning against the fence that ran next to the road.

“You,” exclaimed Peter. “You’ve been acting…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Got it.

No problem about the name. I just copy and paste everyone’s tags. otherwise I would never get it right. haha.

@theshadow

Does this take place in the real world, or in a fictional world?

Oh, a fictional world. I thought that was clear with the country names. It’s a fictional world, but the story could have taken place in the real world. (i.e. not fantasy or something like that)

Aaron is 18. Did I not say that? I did in the first draft. whoops.

I might enter a charrie later, but not now

@theshadow

Oh that is totally fine. Me being an author, I starting wondering if something had happened to you, and I was hoping that you were ok. lol. I need to quit thinking the worst! haha! Just wait until time allows. Hope you had a fun time at the Lake!

@rae @keilah-h

Perfect! And maybe when they start running for their lives (or fight it, either way) They stumble upon this pavilion place, that was mentioned? Just to keep this going, but it also makes sense if the other group finds that

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelseiforgot

Ok, so for anyone who read the first chapter. Jonathan’s brother has been taken away to Academy (as was shown) and this is a day or so later. not much happened in that time that would…[Read more]

@grcr

Ok. Note excluded. haha! I am so helpless when it comes to stuff like this. lololol.

@grcr

One last question from non-fashion me.

Is pink Korean aesthetic makeup? Right? It’s eyeshadow? Or am I completely not knowing what I’m talking about. (Guess who doesn’t ever where makeup either……..)

@grcr

Yes! That makes much more sense. Ok, we’ll see how this turns out. I’m glad this girl has a skirt. As I mentioned before, I draw all my girls in skirts or dresses, so it’s a little hard not to make girl’s legs look like guy’s. haha. (I never wear anything but dresses or skirts which could help make that harder. lol)

Anyhow, thanks for the…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh, and do you want the swastika armband? I’ve seen death squad uniforms with and without.

@freed_and_redeemed

Now THIS style I know. lol. Ok, I take it back, I am a fashion girl. an OLDfashion one. lol.

Of course I’ll do this!!! I was hoping you would ask me to do Riker!!!!
(I am still going nuts wanting to read more about them all!)

Yes! Of course I’ll do black and white.

If GRCR doesn’t reply by this afternoon I might have to…[Read more]

@grcr

Oh, btw, do you have a picture of the tank-top. I’m not a fashion person so I have no idea what “something Kawaii” means. haha

@grcr

Thank you! I’ll get to work this afternoon!

a very cute, girly-girl, energetic vibe

That is completely not me, so we’ll see how this goes. lol. 😀

@theshadow

Hello, I haven’t heard from you in a little while! Just wanted to make sure this got to you!

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @grcr @freed_and_redeemed

Btw, I thought I’d tag a few people and mention that I’ve been sketching characters if anyone is interested. I started the forum here.

Character Sketches

I…[Read more]

@grcr

Thank you! Yes, the characters are from the prologue and Chapter I shared. As for quotes, I actually don’t find it hard to come up with them at all. I just th9ink of the characters and the quotes come.

@freed_and_redeemed

Freedom’s Fire, which also features Riker/Leon as the MCs, is set to hopefully publish this Summer 👀

OH Y…[Read more]