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@savannah_grace2009

Lol….. we’ll just have to see.

@savannah_grace2009

I like their character arch! It sounds great!

I also agree with Jonas, especially if Cass is a Peter-type character. Ok, ultimate redemption––– Cassian is touched by Elroy, (Or one of the others, but i particularly like Elroy for this because he is kinda the family “nobody”) and through Elroy’s faith and selfless actio…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

BUT ONCE HE CONVERTS HER SHE’LL REALIZE SHE LOVES HIM I KNOW IT

and yes I know Sabina will come to her senses eventually!

I won’t lose hope. XD

@ellette-giselle

I said it was a couple posts back….XD XD I thought it was clear 😬😂😂

@jonas

Lilitu was kind of my “you’re never too far gone” person, because his parents are Jraldath and Selena! There’s going to be this epic confrontation scene where he wrestles with the knowledge that he was meant to be evil from the moment he was born. Does that work? Or do I still need Cassian?

Because that’s a good idea, but I feel like…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

OH. so I didn’t have to go from page one and work my way up.

You could have said that sooner.

@ellette-giselle

it’s right above where HighScribe says “no spoilers” and right below the post where you said this:

I don’t think this was on your radar when Cass was first introduced, and in several of the early chapters. (am i right?) so, you need to show a little bit of that in him. just a teeny bit. Maybe he can’t stand it if one of hios bro…

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@savannah_grace2009

Ugh, I can’t find it. I must be blind.

@savannah_gace2009

Her and Aaron? He can’t marry her because she’s not a believer and Aaron will not become unequally yoked. Plus, she hates him.

*gasp* THAT WAY AARON AND TURIN COULD BE BROTHERS FOR REALZ

@ellette-giselle

yesss! Idk I just love her sooo much!

I am also shipping her and Aaron so if they don’t kiss at ALL during the whole book I will be sorely disappointed :/

@savannah_grace2009

No, I haven’t. let me go take a look.

Also have you seen Sef and Lilitu’s character arcs I posted a couple posts back? I tagged Whaley but I’d love to hear your thoughts too!!

@ellette-giselle

Ohhhh okay makes sense!

@savannah_grace2009

Oh I get that. I just mean there was no him thinking he was perfect at all. Like, it seemed to me, the reader,  that he was a humble and loving guy who wanted the best for sef and his brothers. There needs to be a little bit of that arogance showing. just a tiny bit. otherwise it’s not real. Ya know?

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s fair lol

@ellette-giselle

thanks!!! I’ve been having a lot of deep thoughts lately XD lol

I don’t think this was on your radar when Cass was first introduced, and in several of the early chapters. (am i right?) so, you need to show a little bit of that in him. just a teeny bit. Maybe he can’t stand it if one of hios brothers is better at him in som…

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@whalekeeper

Sooo

I think I have an idea for Lilitu’s internal conflict!

I’ve been plotting a lot today, if you couldn’t tell 😂

Sef is self depricating, like you said. She’s more like “I’m stupid. I’m worthless. I’m not worthy of love.”

What I did is prayed before developing characters today and asked God to show me verses to base the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oooooo I LOVE this!!!

Ok, one thing,

You see, Cass has a subconscious drive to pump himself up. He feels insecure about himself, so he manipulates situations in order to get people to look up to him or get praise. He doesn’t fully realize that he’s doing that to Sef, but it’s all a selfish desire to get those feeli…

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Oooooo I LOVE this!!!

Ok, one thing,

You see, Cass has a subconscious drive to pump himself up. He feels insecure about himself, so he manipulates situations in order to get people to look up to him or get praise. He doesn’t fully realize that he’s doing that to Sef, but it’s all a selfish desire to get those feelings of being important and a…

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