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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
I get that! Just let us know if you’re ever sick of critiques and just want to hear the positive stuff to get encouraged!
Haha, but that would be all the time…… lol. I don’t like getting told there’s something wrong with my book, but I also know that it will NEVER get better if I don’t have real help from people l…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Aw I’m sorry :/
I get that! Just let us know if you’re ever sick of critiques and just want to hear the positive stuff to get encouraged!
I’d say…just interview some of your guy friends and ask them to give you a cheat sheet XD XD but I think Whaley’s right, they really do just vibe lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
Thanks so much! I’m feeling a bit better now.
I had a really rough, hectic day at work, and it’s just one of those days when I want to cry about everything. You know? (Girls, you know what I mean. Linus is probably lost. haha)
As for the 4 book thing, I don’t think I have enough to do 4 books. I will try…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 1 month ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Um, yeah. His fear of the unknown already came up a little bit in the barn, and though he got over it there, it is still under the surface and it will come again. I promise.
Maybe you could make his fear a lot stronger, like showing us his thoughts instead of telling us them?
“Well then I don’t see how much help you’ll be,”…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Aaron looks like he’s kind of mischievous. Thanks for sharing these!
He kinda is at times. lol.
By the way, would you mind if I recruited you to read/give feedback on my project? It is a fantasy story set in a world that is similar in some ways to the Wingfeather world. If you don’t want to or don’t have the time, that is all right.
I was l…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
How far through the story are we?
The beginning. Literally. Like, there is a LOT more to go. 1/8 maybe?
Gotchya. Were there others besides Sabina who did not convert?
yes. I mentioned that there were……. was that not clear enough? should I try to mention a bit more about that? By the time they leave the village a majority of…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
and I actually drew Aaron and like the drawing!!
Does he look like he’s leaning back to y’all? I can’t figure it out…. but he looks like he’s leaning in that one on the far right……idk, maybe I’ve been staring at it for too long.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper
Anyone want to see some sketches for LTBL that I did yesterday? Here they are.
I don’t think I like her eyes…… I’ll have to fix them.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper
Ugh. It ate my response. I’m going to cry and give up! I can’t do this anymore!
Ok, I’ve gotten a hold of myself. First let’s start with something funny.
I felt a great disturbance in the Force, as if millions of voices suddenly cried out in terror (some were probably named Aaron) and were…
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @theshadow
Silvanis
“So, Trevor… we’re all in the same boat, then. Great. Any ideas of what’s going on?” Naria wrinkled her snout. “Someone who hates us all equally, even though we’ve never met?”
“No,” Silvanis was quick to speak even though the question wasn’t for him. He stood in a state of calm…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Idk…I’ve always been fond of Rex, but my top clone rotates between Heavy, the Bad Batch, Fives, Cody, and Commander Wolff mostly.
Hold on a minute…does Anakin even know what ‘cheese’ is? If someone actually asked him to say cheese would he know what that meant? Or would it be more like *very visible confusion*
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I love Anakin, as Darth Vader or not, he’s the best Star Wars character of all time, followed closely by all the clones.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@everyone
I’ll try to be here, but i’m sorry, I can’t promise this time. I have rowing classes in the morning 4 days a week, plus we’re getting a jersey cow today who is gonna be my responsibility, and my birthday is Sunday and we don’t know when we can celebrate it yet because my dad couldn’t get the day off from work. So, yeah, long story short…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
lolll facts
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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh, and if anyone doesn’t understand why there are helicopters in the dragon pic, it’s from the movie Reign of Fire.
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
It’s fine, it just was kinda weird. For whatever reason, my mind automatically went to a villain laugh XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
It glitched when Chase took off his hoodie for dance practise.
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