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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I would have chosen something like this instead. Now here’s a piece with heart and soul in it! You can feel the pain in this song.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I would have chosen something like this instead. Now here’s a piece with heart and soul in it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Okay, okay, I also had it on while reading, and I was…… underwhelmed…….. To put it gently.
It just feels like the difference between a wind up music box and watching the Danish National Symphony. There just wasn’t any heart and character behind it! The music didn’t feel alive to me.
Well, there’s my honest opinion.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Yes, if the others are wanting to draw something this time. You can tag them and ask.
Or I can….
@mineralizedwritings @rae @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium
Are any of y’all in interested in extending the deadline, or are you just not going to be doing this character at all?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I’m still in!
Do we have a storyline or plot that I haven’t been made aware of……….?
I feel like I might be missing something?
When should I introduce my character?
Yep, tomorrow sounds great!
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Ok I got my first character. She’s the most combative one I could think of
Felicity Frost
Felicity is 18, is very tall (close to 6′), and athletic looking. She has long white hair that goes down almost to her waist that she often keeps in braids. Her face is round and elfin looking, with very pale skin. Sometimes, her height and her bright…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
Contents of Baron’s bag:
A tiny gas mask
A little note written in the hand of a little girl saying “To the white hair guy, Thank you” with a funky smiley face and signed “Rya” on the back written in a neat hand, “Your Welcome.” with a neat smiley face.
A small knife
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
I completely forgot, I’m sorry 🙁
I don’t know if I’ll be able to do a drawing in time, but I can try
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Sounds good to me!
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Oh, and just a note about Baron, he looks in his twenties even though he has white hair. In case you didn’t notice

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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@jonas sounds good 👍
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I just realized this is an adventure rp, so there’s probably going to be a lot of action, but most of my characters are useless in a fight lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Finally. I’ve been really looking forward to this chapter. It was good timing too. This was the point in Alan’s life when he was ready. The line “He didn’t need to become that hero, for The Saviour had been that hero for him.” is truly quotable.
Just one small thing.
You start the sentence:
After a little more hesitation. D…
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@jonas I think we can stick with being pulled from other worlds, but maybe have an npc explain what happened pretty early on do we don’t have characters wasting a lot of time trying to figure that out. Just a suggestion
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Hi! Glad you’re back! I’ve been praying for you, though my prayer habit is hardly a habit rn. I’m glad you got a doctor who understands and congrats on finishing your degree. ❤️ Hope you start feeling better soon.
I’ve been doing okay. My family’s been going through a lot and I really need to get a job but I always have a ha…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings That looks awesome! Love the perspective
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Pencil
Eraser
Pencil sharpener
Mini drawing paper
Numbing cream
And I think that’s it. I may add to this list later on, but I think for now it’s good.
Why gas mask?
Over cautious and ***censured to keep back story secrets***
@raxforge you know what, since his powers are air, he wouldn’t need a gas mask, he could hold a pocket of clean air for him to breathe, so remove that from the list.
@raxforge
Wow, Baron has changed so much since this. I was going to have him be an artist, should I bring that back?
…sorry, he’s an artist?!?
He was in my earlier character designs.
Would you like me to draw something in his style?
Sure!