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Ellette Giselle started the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
HELLO!!!
So excited because today is November and now I can release the beginning of the second book in my saga!
(tagging a few others who might have been reading the first one. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon)
Again, this is in draft form still, so feedback and critiques are welcome.
The Veil of Night
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@hybridlore oh whoops sorry I missed your most recent rp
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Ok extra character description just because- Fel is currently wearing a white shirt, brown pants, and a vest, but not the fancy kind of vest idk how to describe it. And her hair is in two braids and she’s wearing a brown leather cap. And boots.
Felicity – With Marcel and Sara, edge of Elderstrand
Felicity stumbled out…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge
“Hey, get off of him!” Julian yelled, rushing at Brutus. He crashed into the young man, Knocking him against the wall.
In a flash, Leon was at his side, dagger poised. “What is going on with you? Stop attacking innocent people!”
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
You have just unknowingly made a huge mistake
Baron—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon and Julian, Everstrand edge
Baron stood, before quickly rushing to the older man, grabbing him by the throat. A strong wind caught up his companion.
“Who are you? Did he send you?” Baron hissed.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Baron—With Flare, Ben Gunn, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
As the new figures dropped in, Baron fell back towards the corner of a building, a wind once again picking up around him. He crouched like a frog, his spidery legs making him look comical.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Being in the latest US timezone is the worst. Im so behind :(((
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Happy Halloween/ Reformation Day/ November!
I still don’t understand the whole no quarter November thing but I like watching the minor arson each year
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
(Okay, that is so funny what Baron just said, because of something that happens later……..)
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Everstrand edge
Julian smiled sheepishly. “Leon’s said something like that a few times.” He was feeling completely relaxed. Brutus didn’t seem to be a threat at all.
Leon gave Brutus a stiff nod. “I’m Leon.”
At t…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Also Rae, “Gol” is my new favorite word
Lol, “gol” stands for “giggle out loud”
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I guess we can just say my rp happened just before Andrew’s.
Ellette, go ahead and rp
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Baron—with Leon and Julian on the Elderstrand edge
“You are too loud,” Baron commented, looking directly at Julian. “You will get killed one day with that voice.” Baron appeared not to notice Julian’s hand. “I’m Brutus.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Gol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Everstrand edge
Leon raised an eyebrow. “Listen here, I think you should be the first to–”
Julian cut him off. “I’m Julian Damoss,” he said, offering his hand. “That’s Leon. Don’t mind him, he’s normally not this snappish.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Baron—With Leon and Julian, Everstrand edge
“As far as I see it, we’re allies until we discover we’re enemies.”
Baron turned around, still holding the scarf over the lower half of his face. “Interesting view. I was raised with the opposite view…but then again my upbringing never did me any good…” He let go of his scarf,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Elsa is a Disney icon (with a lot of bad messages) She and all of New Disney aught to have it’s face burned off.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Everstrand edge
Leon let go of his sword with his right hand, but continued to rest his left hand on the hilt. “I don’t know. Why should we trust you?” He turned. “Come on Julian, let’s go.”
Julian raised an eyebrow. “And leave him to follow us and stab us in the back? No thanks.”
Leon glared at him. “You r…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Don’t be hard on yourself bro 🙂
One thing about Andrew, when he feels good about something, no one can tear him down but on the other side of the spectrum, when he feels down about something, it’s very hard to convince him otherwise.
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