TheShadow

@linus-smallprint

Hello! Hello!

Wonderful! First feedback! (I’ve over here being excited about crazy things like this)

Think this is a good opening. It sets a darker stage than the previous book, but you warned us.

Yes, I am going for a darker stage.

Also, how the characters act makes sense. Joseph is traumatized and Sabina is trying to be…

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Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.

Frustrating charrie.

YES! 100%

Julian would have shrugged and walked away by now, but Leon used to be that frustrating character, and now he’s trying to do the only thing that was done to him that pulled him out of that downward spin.

@rae

@whalekeeper

I finished school this morning. I get up at five to do it and I work fast, Reading and writing are a strong point of mine, and I have a lot of that. I normally finish around ten.

@whalekeeper

Same!

Reading about charries and DNA!

@raxforge

I think Baron needs French Toast…it would certainly improve his mood XD

@raxforge @ellette-giselle

Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.

Frustrating charrie.

10 pages!!!!!!

@raxforge @ellette-giselle

Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, and Julian at the Everstrand edge

Brutus’s eyes met Leon’s as if he were going to make some kind of firy remark, but he turned his gaze away. “Hesitation can mean death. Learn that and quick.” He pulled a dagger off of one of the guards, turning it so that it reflected his…[Read more]

@raxforge @rae

Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge

Leon sighed, his stiff posture relaxing slightly. “I don’t know who they are. But you seem like you’re in trouble.” He took a step forward. “I don’t want to drive you away. I would much rather help you, and perhaps fight beside you against whatever hunts you, b…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @raxforge

Baron (Brutus) with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge.

“I don’t…” Brutus stopped. No, no they did not need to hear the rest of that sentence, it would lead to questions. Brutus gave a short nod, cautiously backing away until he reached the unconscious city guards. By these he knelt, studying their…[Read more]

@rae  @raxforge

Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge

Leon’s tone matched the stern look on his face. “Then I suggest you leave. If you are not willing to take a risk and trust people, yet you are willing to take the risk of attacking someone you don’t even know, then you need to stay away. I will not have you ki…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

btw, is Brutus Baron’s name, because if it’s not I’d like him to give his name as “Baron” soon, because this whole two different name thing is starting to get me mixed up.

Sorry about that.

His name is not Brutus, it is in fact Baron. But he uses the name Brutus for…reasons.

@elette @raxforge

Baron (Brutus)—With Ben Gunn,…[Read more]

@rae

btw, is Brutus Baron’s name, because if it’s not I’d like him to give his name as “Baron” soon, because this whole two different name thing is starting to get me mixed up.

@rae @raxforge

Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge

Leon rolled to his feet, the dagger still in his hand. Julian scrambled up and lunged at Brutus, but Leon yanked him back. “Good Lord, he’s something else.”

Carefully Leon moved to place himself between Brutus and Ben. “Everyone needs to calm down.” He pointed at B…[Read more]

@raxforge

Andrew? sound good to you?
Sure

Lol

@ellette-giselle @Andrew

I already wrote my rp…

@raxforge @ellette-giselle

I’m just gonna run with it.

Baron—with Ben, Flare, Julian, and Leon, Everstrand edge

Baron knocked Julian and Leon back with a gust of strong wind. He winced as he got up, before sending another gust of wind to bash some city guards against the wall of a building, knocking them out.

“Ben Gunn? Which supervisor are…[Read more]

@raxforge @rae

Sure.

Andrew? sound good to you?

@rae

I know they do.

@raxforge @ellette-giselle

Should we just say that Ben Gunn said his line, then Leon and Julian attacked Baron, then Flare started playing?