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@loopylin

Thank you so much! Yes, I love fancy cursive.

@jonas

How tall are they?

@whalekeeper @loopylin @hybridlore @rae @raxforge @grcr

leon and Julian — Elderstrand (Group 1)

Leon stood and watched the way Ellis fought, trying to gauge the weakness in the creature. Thing. Knight. Whatever it was.

He didn’t have long to stand there. One of the things was coming for him.

Leon ducked a blow a…[Read more]

@jonas @whalekeeper 👍

*2 and 1/2 down

@hybridlore

Felicity- Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand 

Felicity got shakily to her feet.

“Yep. Didn’t feel-” she stumbled suddenly, and Sara caught her.

“… a thing,” she finished. Her eyes were half glazed over, but she was still scanning the nearby area, ready to throw herself at any threat that came close.

“You okay?” she asked, trying to deflect.

@jonas ok cool thx

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae@grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @jonas

3 Ironwalkers down, 9 to go, if anyone was wondering. Pretty sure there were originally a dozen.

I’ll hold off on having Felicity fight anymore.

@ellette-giselle
That looks great! And that R is very impressive I love the swirls

@freed_and_redeemed Aww Ryo! So cute <3

I love seeing your character drawings

@jonas I was imagining the Ironwalkers as just enchanted suits of armor before. The fact that there’s something inside but they still don’t make any noise makes them a lot scarier.

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper

Felicity- Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand

Felicity took the staff gratefully. Her knuckles were raw and…[Read more]

I think I’ll add another character after the fight is over, if that’s alright. Or guess technically two characters. One and a half? I should go back and check how many character slots we’re allowed.

@linus-smallprint @hybridlore

I understand both your points. However, there are many instances in the Bible when God blessed or rewarded people after they told lies to save the lives of innocent people. Sabina brought up two such instances.

And, God has also told people to withhold truth/miss-lead. Like in 1 Samuel 16

The Lord said to Samuel,…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Yay! Freakiness is the intention :]

And yes, lots of world building. And re-world building. I still have zero plot tho

Oh whoops we’ve been forgetting to tag @hybridlore

@ellette-giselle My character doesn’t even have military training. She’s just… very determined.
@grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @jonas @rae

Felicity— Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand

“Clickmen.” Felicity shuddered at the sound of metal footsteps. It was clear as they got closer that they were not the machines Felicity was used to, but she didn’t care…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

So, I think I can safely say which scenes you have added in and which ones were in the draft. I’ve run into this same problem several times. If my book is more then a year old when I do the re-writes and big edits, you can always tell what I wrote before and what is added. I think our style and skill develops the more we write,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh. You are not the first I’ve heard to say that, but I don’t mind that you don’t agree. Sabina does voice my own beliefs however, so I won’t be changing this.

I would be interested in your reasons behind why you don’t agree with her/my reasoning. Though keep in mind I won’t be changing this scene, so if you find it a waste of…[Read more]

@rae

Don’t look at me.

My guys are just normal people with some military training.

@whalekeeper @grcr @raxforge @loopylin @jonas

Leon and Julian —Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Julian looked up and his eyes widened. He yanked Leon back. “Look out!”

Leon spun, gripping his sword tightly. His eyes and mouth opened in shock. “What are t…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

This is one of the best ones yet!!

I’m curious, did you write this from scratch, or was it in the draft?

This was super well done, and I like everything about it. (though i did see a typo here and there.)

Very well done.

@jonas YES!

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @grcr @raxforge @loopylin

Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Brutus sighed, before coughing once more. After which, he harnessed the wind once again, throwing the strong wind at the foremost figure, trying to knock it over. But nothing appeared to happen to the things. Brutus gave a cry,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yes, it’s the Iliad and the Odyssey as a musicale and it was SO WELL done!

oooo, next chapter! Yay!