TheShadow

@linus-smallprint

Well don’t make your readers mad, and then they’ll get your aesthetic boards right. lol

Yeah, that’s better! Now I can see a picture that was blocked before. The man with his arms in the air. I think that cries redemption louder than the red text.

Good. Okay.

I didn’t realize how dark the text made it until I took it o…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

hmmmmm.

I’ll have to look through Sabina’s letters and see if I mentioned his age.

@whalekeeper

no prob!

I know what it feels like after grappling.

@linus-smallprint

Wow, thanks! Even got the purple eyes. Is that a crow on a horse in there? Did you put the hand in there for the his wizard scars?

You’re welcome!

Yes, that is a crow on the horse.

Yes, that is for the scars.

It feels a little too dark for Alan. It needs his bright and heroic side. I don’t see much of a desire to go on or b…

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@linus-smallprint

I see Eric’s taken up a new hobby, teasing everyone for any signs of love. He better watch his back if he gets a girlfriend.

Lol. No kidding.

Joseph seems to have overcome his shame over being afraid? Unless he was just distracted in that moment. But I feel if this had happened earlier, he would be calling himself a coward a…

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@linus-smallprint

haha.

@whalekeeper

do you want to RP with barns, or should we just keep going?

@linus-smallprint

I felt creative so I made this for you.

I hope you like it.

It’s probably not perfect, but then again, an aesthetic is only supposed to remind you of the character, so maybe it’ll be fine.

I don’t know how many snowballs I even have…but here’s 161 words:

She didn’t want to wake up.

Closing her eyes, turning her face into her pillow and pulling the blanket over her head, she desperately wanted this to be a dream, wanted to go back to sleep and pretend nothing was wrong.

But Aubrielle persisted, the worry and unease in her voice c…

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@ellette-giselle @grcr

Okay thank you guys!!! <33

@hybridlore

I’m glad you thought so.

@whalekeeper

*pffft*

@hybridlore

Asher found a girl! 🥰

I know!! I’m so happy!

Eric is kinda wicked, and Noah and Darrien enjoy it way to much. lolololol

Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁

Yeah, I know.

@savannah_grace2009

I like this. It has good potential as a start. I think it really gets the reader into the plot. It’ll hook a lot more people.

I say keep it

OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!

@esther-c

(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Okay….

I have come to a decision lol

I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.

Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]

@koshka

How long should I give you before deciding that you must have forgotten to post your RP?

I don’t want to nag, but if you think you posted and are waiting on me, and I’m waiting on you, no one will ever post. Ya know?

lolol.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

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The next morning, the adults were up bright and early, surprisingly before the children. “Amelia, why don’t you join us girls in the kitchen,” Sabina said when Amelia and Joseph appeared. “We can work on the big breakfast for the children.”

“Oh…

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@hybridlore

Vendailia is beyond.It’s not a bad idea to run the boarder, but it’s a bad idea to do it emotionally unstable and with part of a death wish, if you know what i mean.

Several soldiers already escaped by doing this.

Just watched Klaus on Netflix and it is the cutest Christmas movie ever I want to watch it again already