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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
aw yesss
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…
It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?
Ummmm
Let me think lol
I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol
And character development ideas would be helpful too!!
I also just want to know t…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????
Yeah lol
you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD
The frog wedding is adorable.
I KNOWWWW
YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!
no comment….
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.
NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS😱😱😱😱
*sobs hysterically*
Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!
yesssss
*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 3 weeks ago
@koshka I don’t remember the lyrics very well, but I read that the band does a lot of anti-human trafficking charity work
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks ago
Why thank you. Glad to be your local online conundrum ✨
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Kefa replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks ago
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Kefa replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks ago
Ah, okay. Thank you! (I hate fandoms…)
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks ago
So like my littlest sister’s nose. XD
No, that’s a boop. Bops are for heads and shoulders. Boops are for noses.
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 weeks ago
The reason our denomination only has two is because a sacrament should be for everyone, and not everyone is called to be healed or married or ordained. However, everyone can and should be baptized and take communion.
Uh, it should be more something that is rewarding, and not achievable for everyone, because it is meant to be like a…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks ago
Also, doesn’t Hilda have some… *cough cough* uhhh… LGBTQ things in it…. 😳…. or is that just dumb fan stuff?
dumb fan stuff
I just finished the first Alcatraz book and it is one of my new favorite books. It’s hilarious. I listened to the audiobook in my car and there were multiple times when Al would say…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 3 weeks ago
@raxforge Ooo I love Twenty One Pilots. I will check that out later
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Loopy replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed Yay, fantasy! I’m excited for this!
I’m curious, what does a no magic fantasy look like? Does that just mean it’s set in a different world? Or that it’s medieval era inspired?
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed Those look really cool! I’m excited for your fantasy story. It looks interesting
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Kefa replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks ago
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Kefa changed their profile picture 3 weeks ago
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Kefa replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 3 weeks ago
Here is a meme to go along with it! ^
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Kefa replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks ago
Ohhh! So that is why is topped breathing! (I probably shouldn’t have followed those steps…)
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