TheShadow

@theshadow

Yay, now I get to stalk my sis’ book! I mean… hello stranger I don’t know, I will also be critiquing it too!

OOPS!

It should be “She said *cheerfully*”

and

“Hello, hello, hello!” She *called*

Ik it is late, but here are some of my favorite quotes from Carrot Cake!!!:

“I didn’t disappear, I just decided I didn’t want to be seen!” She cheerfully said.

“Hello, hello, hello!” Carrot Cake yelled, appearing out of nowhere.

“Isn’t wonderful!? We all are together for the end of the world!” Carrot Cake smiled widely.

“Okay, I…[Read more]

@keilah-h

😳

😧

😮

🙂‍↔️

😅

😐

🫠

😶‍🌫️✌️

🫥

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Thanks! 🥳

 

@keilah-h

… I am not sure to laugh, or feel intimidated…

@raxforge @koshka

Eddie

Ed turned to look up at the person talking to them. She squinted.

Foreign Literature. Wasn’t that where they were headed now?

“Lemme consult my map,” she said. She waved at Ellie, who had turned on her earplugs to make it through the crowded hallway.

“What?” Ellie said, tapping the device in her ear. She turned,…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I mean I understand they have to have some water in order to live, but didn’t you say somewhere else that Azers don’t like water? Or did I completely misunderstand and that’s just a Ottoline/Naami thing?

So I’m not completely sure about that XDXD

Mainly, they just are very possessive of their lands and don’t want trespassers XD especia…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Girl you should legit be an editor hahahaha you’ve always been sooooo good with critiques!!!

Thank you so muchhhhh

@whalekeeper aww that’s the cutest <3

Is Barnes wearing her mask? I can’t remember what it looks like.

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHH GIRL I LOVE FANTASY <333333 it’s my favoriteeee I’m so excited!

@theducktator

XD

@savannah_grace2009

tysm, idk which is my fav…

@the_lost-journal

I skimmed through this, and your WIP’s sound SO COOL!

I love them!

@grcr

Just finished reading through all your chapters… man, I dont even know what to say…

Must read moreeeeee. WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Aw girlie thank you so much… <33

Eloy is my favorite… Aubrielle is probably second. And, since he hasn’t done anything yet that I can see, Cassian is also a fav.

AWWWWW

Why Eloy thoughhhh he kinda just drops off the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Omc thank you so much girl, that means a lot…you’re gonna make me cryyyy

Ahhh thank youuuu 😭😭💜💜💜💜💜

Your critique was EXACTLY what I was looking for, so thank you!!!

–Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

YAYYYY!!! That’s one of the things I was worried about, and I’m s…[Read more]

@theducktator

besides fern I think she has the worst status XD

@theducktator

😂. You know very little about her though 🤣 besides her mental state 😂😂😂😂

@highscribeofaetherium

I can’t argue 🤣

@highscribeofaetherium

oh, uh thanks! Also it is meant to be funny 😅 but it makes sense, Carrot Cake is a deranged psychopathic, pyromaniac, being!

that is weird

 

@highscribeofaetherium

Here is the thing, TKOK is on an island, separated from the world, they still have magic, creatures, and races that have been long wiped out on the rest of the earth. They do have some enemies, because they do not take up the whole island. Any way, it is illegal to have any aircraft, boats, or people near those islands,…[Read more]