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@ellette-giselle

I like Aaron so far, I think his temper adds more depth to him. The other characters are fine, I haven’t gotten to know them as much yet.

@ellette-giselle

Just to match, can you do b&w? Thanks.

@ellette-giselle

Just finished reading this section, and I do have two things to say about it. First, I think you used “questioning look” twice. Second, the cleaning scene was a little long. I think you could shorten it, I understand the purpose of it but it did feel long. Overall, though, this section was good.

@ellette-giselle

Your welcome, and thank you!

@ellette-giselle

And a braid like this:

@ellette-giselle

Here’s the dress:

@ellette-giselle

Okay!

Name: Rosalind

Age: 20

Gender: female

Clothing: medieval dress (will include reference), golden colored belt, locket, most likely a flower in her hair

Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): medieval ages

Physical appearance: long auburn hair (probably braided), hazelnut eyes, a few inches shorter…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yes, there is one! I can send a description now if you would like to draw her.

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks for the help, that was really thought provoking. What you said about the relationship with darkness was interesting, I’ll have to think about that more.

@ellette-giselle

That’s okay!

And also I’ll have to think about it, I have a lot of characters needed to be drawn XD

@ellette-giselle

I LOVE HIM!!! HE LOOKS GREAT, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!

@keilah-h @rae

Trevor

“Steady, mate. We don’t know its threat level yet.” Sniper said to Trevor. Trevor sighed but didn’t protest.

At that moment, the beast stepped out from behind a tree. Man, that thing is ugly. “Azalea, stay close to me, and follow Sniper’s lead.” Trevor said to Azalea, then to Sniper, “Give us the word and we’ll fight that…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sure, here’s a pic of a marine pistol (if that one doesn’t work then I can find a different kind of pistol):

@ellette-giselle

Yep lol. It was the only haircut I could find that looked remotely like what I was imagining (the other haircuts didn’t look great imo). So Trevor will definitely look like the exact opposite in terms of expression.

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!! I forgot to mention, but Trevor also has tan skin, and freckles. Here’s a reference pic for his hair btw (not the right color but I would like a haircut similar to this please):

@ellette-giselle

@ellette-giselle

Pants kind of like this

@ellette-giselle

I was just about to request another drawing lol.

Name: Trevor Henson

Age: 17

Gender: male

Clothing: cargo pants (or really any outdoor pants), field shirt (will include a reference), hiking boots, and a sailors jacket (or an aviator jacket, whichever you would prefer to draw)

Time period (Or the time period the fashion…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

That’s a good point, I guess I’ll have to think about the mutant thing more. I was thinking of maybe replacing them with regular people who are forming gangs to survive, and maybe show how desperation can divide people (which is also dark but can show that being alone and only thinking of yourself, jumping to the worst con…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Im so sorry that I didn’t get back to you! Thank you for caring, I appreciate it, and for answering my questions. Since this is a fictional world, I would explain maybe how Christianity got there. Or is it basically the real world but different names? Sorry if this sounds confusing.

The second part was good, I don’t have muc…[Read more]