TheShadow

@ellette-giselle

THATS THE ENDING?! Nononono it can’t be the ending right?! Julius chose to die right?! Okay that got me, that hit really hard oh my goodness. Wow.

“He shielded his wife with his own body. That lion is still trying to tare him off of her. I don’t she’s even been touched, but that beast is furious.”

Awww 🥺

Ignatius stepped a…

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@ellette-giselle

You’re welcome! I’m excited for the next chapter.

@ellette-giselle

Man… that hit hard. Really hard. I may or may not have almost started crying at the end there. Great job, I noticed you put in more descriptions of the colosseum, and that really helped to imagine the inside of the colosseum. The atmosphere was good as well, and everything was great!!

@ellette-giselle

I have to brush my sister’s hair, and then I should just about have this next chapter ready for you!

Okay, can’t wait!!

@ellette-giselle

Do you think Julius is going to believe?

Hmm, I’m not sure. The way he’s acting, trying only to preserve himself, it doesn’t seem like he will. Or maybe when he’s see Marcus and Flavia die (if they do) then he’ll come to faith. Sigh, it’s another game of will-he-won’t-he XD

@ellette-giselle

I LOVE IT!!!! Thank you so much, it’s so good! I like it in black and white, and also I haven’t figured out his surcoat yet lol. Thanks again, I really appreciate it!!

@ellette-giselle

Chapter 13 and 14 are really smooth, the scenes were good and atmospheric. The only thing I noticed which isn’t even a big issue is that you used Caesar’s name instead of Nero’s in chapter 13 at some point. It was great though!! Once again, Julius’ inner conflict was portrayed well.

@keilah-h

thanks! I’m glad you were willing to listen to my randomness

You’re welcome, and anytime!

@ellette-giselle

Sorry it took a sec!

That’s okay!

“Julius, what a surprise,” Ignatius said in a low voice. “I see that you were a traitor all along.”

I KNEW IT! I KNEW YOU COULDNT BE TRUSTED IGNATIUS!!!

Chapter 11 and 12 were great, although it seems to me like more than two months had passed since Julius and Marcus last saw each other. Ma…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Keep an eye out, I’m about to post the next chapter.

Yesss!!

@ellette-giselle

Now someone is starting to get tangled in the is-he-is-he-not? phase. Love it!!

I can’t make up my mind about Ignatius XD

@stephie

How did I forget that I did not forget your tag?

Good question XD

@princesachronicle22

Alright that sounds good!

@stephie

That’s a good perspective, I’m not sure yet if I’m actually ready to write it yet since it would be  lot of research on radiation and might make me a little sad. That’s one of the reasons I don’t like dystopian since it’s usually pretty depressing, like The Hunger Games or The Tripods. We’ll see though, I’ll probably try to lighten it up…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thank you for sending him! I love drawing for people!

Of course, thanks so much for drawing him! Also, somehow I forgot to mention this, but he’s a knight.

@ellette-giselle

Ooh that’s really good advice, I’ll keep it in mind, thanks!!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, sorry this took so long, but here’s the character I finally decided on:

Name: Eldred

Age: 21

Gender: male

Clothing: medieval tunic and leggings accustom to knights, as well as a cross that hangs around his neck

Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): medieval era

Physical appearance: tall, muscular, j…[Read more]

@keilah-h

lol yeah I don’t know who that is

He’s an author that writes a lot of dark  futuristic sci-fi stuff.

Whenever my dad tells me about the latest sci-fi book he’s been reading, I decide I want to write a science-fiction AU of whatever my current work is

Ooh, that’s cool!

lol i’m sorry for diverting the topic that was too random

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@whalekeeper

We often become blind to the flaws in our greatest loves… man, I’m spurting poetry!

Lol well you’re right.

Drama is fine as long as you can see everything from a bird’s eye view, and you seem to be a pretty practical person so far.

Thanks! I don’t want to make something that’s super melodramatic though (still figuring out what that means XD).

@keilah-h

Yeah, I sometimes forget to make sure what I’m writing isn’t too dark for me (I think I’ve been reading too much Ray Bradbury lately). Thanks!