TheShadow

@ellette-giselle

Yes, there is one! I can send a description now if you would like to draw her.

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks for the help, that was really thought provoking. What you said about the relationship with darkness was interesting, I’ll have to think about that more.

@ellette-giselle

That’s okay!

And also I’ll have to think about it, I have a lot of characters needed to be drawn XD

@ellette-giselle

I LOVE HIM!!! HE LOOKS GREAT, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!

@keilah-h @rae

Trevor

“Steady, mate. We don’t know its threat level yet.” Sniper said to Trevor. Trevor sighed but didn’t protest.

At that moment, the beast stepped out from behind a tree. Man, that thing is ugly. “Azalea, stay close to me, and follow Sniper’s lead.” Trevor said to Azalea, then to Sniper, “Give us the word and we’ll fight that…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sure, here’s a pic of a marine pistol (if that one doesn’t work then I can find a different kind of pistol):

@ellette-giselle

Yep lol. It was the only haircut I could find that looked remotely like what I was imagining (the other haircuts didn’t look great imo). So Trevor will definitely look like the exact opposite in terms of expression.

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!! I forgot to mention, but Trevor also has tan skin, and freckles. Here’s a reference pic for his hair btw (not the right color but I would like a haircut similar to this please):

@ellette-giselle

@ellette-giselle

Pants kind of like this

@ellette-giselle

I was just about to request another drawing lol.

Name: Trevor Henson

Age: 17

Gender: male

Clothing: cargo pants (or really any outdoor pants), field shirt (will include a reference), hiking boots, and a sailors jacket (or an aviator jacket, whichever you would prefer to draw)

Time period (Or the time period the fashion…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

That’s a good point, I guess I’ll have to think about the mutant thing more. I was thinking of maybe replacing them with regular people who are forming gangs to survive, and maybe show how desperation can divide people (which is also dark but can show that being alone and only thinking of yourself, jumping to the worst con…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Im so sorry that I didn’t get back to you! Thank you for caring, I appreciate it, and for answering my questions. Since this is a fictional world, I would explain maybe how Christianity got there. Or is it basically the real world but different names? Sorry if this sounds confusing.

The second part was good, I don’t have muc…[Read more]

@keilah-h @rae

Sniper switched to a gun and aimed into the forest. “Silvanis, how large is this creature, and is there more than one?”

“About the size of a rat from the planet Dary. Only one.” Silvanis answered. Dary? Haven’t heard of that place before.

“About this high and this wide.” Fairy showed the size with her hands. “Oh this’ll be a goo…[Read more]

@rae

That sounds good XD

Trevor

“Trevor’s right. There’s nothing better than getting into a fight.” Silvanis agreed, then was promptly elbowed by Fairy. “Finally, someone else agrees.” Trevor said. I’m beginning to like this Silvanis guy. “You two are going to get each other killed, I just know it.” Azalea sighed.

@ellette-giselle

First chapter was good, though I’m a bit confused. Does this take place in the real world, or in a fictional world? Also how old is Aaron?

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!! It was fun, just very, very tiring XD

@princesachronicle22

Chase scene sounds great.

@rae @keilah-h

 Trevor

As the group proceeded into the forest, Trevor thought he heard something rustling in the leaves, then a twig snapping. “Did anyone else hear that?” Everi, one of the men in the group, asked. We’re being followed. Trevor thought, and a smile crept over his face. “I hear…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sorry I haven’t been getting back to you! I was at a lake house for a few days with friends. But now I’m back, so I’ll probably read over the first chapter this morning and tell you my thoughts. Sorry again!

@keilah-h

Lol yeah

Trevor

“Since most of ya didn’t look like you wanted to go lookin’ for beetle grubs, we’ll be huntin’ mammal prey. Do all of ya know ‘ow to do that?” Sniper asked as he led Trevor and the group through the forest.

“Fairy doesn’t, but I can teach her.” Silvanis answered, and Trevor watched his face turn red. He tried his b…[Read more]