TheLoonyOne

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Lol, I can’t judge you for it. I wrote a scene of my oc Lesli sobbing once 😂. But my other oc Tauren was there for her and it was sweeeeet and I looooved writing it 🤣

Sad and sweet scenes are my favorite to write. Oh, and nostalgic ones.

Do you have a favorite type to write in particular?

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That’s good! And sad 😭

totally agree with @loopylin, the “right” “right” thing is so cute lol

@TheLoonyOne  I love Elissa and this little backstory so much! Also the “Right.” “Right.” thing they do all the time is adorable.

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That was really interesting! One of the thing I really liked Elissa. She plays such a important role in giving the story hope. I would add some more description to the outside, it says it is wintry, but is it foggy? Icy? Is his breath making clouds it is so cold?

Thanks for sharing! I made comments on the google doc, and was going…[Read more]

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Just some ideas about what could possibly drive him, of course you know your story better than I do, so don’t feel obligated to use any.

Maybe think about why he likes the simulation so much- obviously it is better than his usual life, but is there a emotion/experience he is seeking through using it? He is going on a date, so it…[Read more]

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And add a lot of chapters in the middle cause they are not giving me enough for my precious character growth!

Good idea!

 I actually haven’t started writing her yet but she is literally later in the chapter I’m writing now so, I’ve got to figure it out. Ugh, personality. Also pretty underdeveloped. 😑💀 Why is writing so hard! I’ve b…

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I like how you get into the action right away. I might point something out that’s completely irrelevant for the fact it’s just one chapter (not much you can include).

I like how the descriptions of Cammie help you understand what Milo is feeling. You don’t just get a outside description (hair color and whatnot) but instead how she…[Read more]

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Ok! I’m excited to see it! 🙂

Glad to hear it’s not that creepy! I know writing dystopian can be hard, (My current WIP is dystopian) But I think it has so many good theme potentials. Going through hardship grows us and our characters 🙂

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Sounds like that novel class really helps with writers block lol.

I like Adler and Bancroft. I haven’t completely finished creating her character (I thought of her while writing the chapter before the one she first appears in) so I might have to consider how race might be a part of her last name too.

Hope you find one that works! T…[Read more]

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I’d love to read some of your work and make suggestions (story related, not grammar stuffs)!!

However don’t consider me an editor… I stay pretty busy with school and other stuff. I can pop in with some feedback every now and then though! I’m pretty cautious about what I read (I remember you saying your WIP started being based of a…[Read more]

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A couple last name suggestions for Elissa:

Cromwell, McKay, Adler, Finnegan, Underwood, Halifax, Bancroft

Don’t feel obligated to use any, as you can see I kinda like unique names 😂 and they very well might not fit your story.

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Yeah KP is being weird for me too lol

Love it! I’m so curious how the dynamic’s play out, and I love your names too! That’s great you can work on your book in chapters… LOL I have zero clue how to start XD

I have a sketchbook with a sheet for each character and possible plot points, and a couple word files for when I come up with…[Read more]

@TheLoonyOne @GodlyFantasy12 @freedomwriter76 Thank you guys! Theses are really helpful! 😊

I really like Lizzie, Calla, Meena, Robin, and Gwen. Now I have to decide hehe 😬

@power That doesn’t sound weird at all. I was thinking of having some characters call her Lemon Head as a joke, but I also like the idea of her just always going by it. (…[Read more]

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Leatherworking sounds so cool! I can also see how it would be expensive. 😐 What else have you made?

Yeah it’s a lot of fun! I made a binocular case, and cut up the old one to use as a pattern. I used the old logo and incorporated it into the new case. I kinda went ham with the price on that project… just had to have a piece of that…[Read more]

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We have to take the driver’s Ed class, then our six hours of driving and six hours of watching with an instructor, then 50 hours or six months of permit driving, 10 at night. Then you take the tests and you get your license!

Oh ok, that’s pretty similar too us.

Leather! Leather-work is unfortunately a bit of an expensive hobby, I…[Read more]

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Yeah, thanks. I guess I won’t leave my backpack alone like that again 😅 Kinda disapionted because I made the wallet 🙁 and it had 30$ in it. 🙁

For us it’s 10 hours night driving, 40 hours day driving, drivers ed, and five drives. Then we get to drive unsupervised with a license. And after that no kids under 20 in the car unless…[Read more]

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I’m doing driver’s Ed too!

Ayyyye

I just did my first drive, but I’ve been driving on my student permit (ok, now I’m driving with a student permit paper copy now because my wallet and keys were stolen at the climbing gym 😭) for a couple months.

One of the more recent times we went down to the beach at night, laid on towels, and sta…

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Ok, i’m doing the other pic separate so KP doesn’t eat my post.

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Sorry for the late reply… school. And driver’s Ed.    -_-

I get the big cities thing! I love the outdoors (was a birdwatcher before my family stopped going on birdwatching outings together, it’s not exactly safe to go alone) but for me I can’t spend too much time away from the city, lol perhaps it’s because I was b…[Read more]