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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle I echo Linus’s statement–this was a great way to re-introduce Adrian to the narrative!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@power I had a song on in the background that started epic then turned really goofy as I read your little poem and it was perfect for it lolllll
thing is, it was by complete coincidence.
@freed_and_redeemed oooh nice scene!!
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lollll-XD
Life/Writing Update, Request for Brainstorming Help, and maybe a scene snippet👀
Hiiii everyone!!! Y’all may have noticed that I’m not super active here on KP anymore😅 Truth is, life has been kinda hectic,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle no it’s not bad, I just haven’t read it yet. Lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@grcr very cool!
also I agree with whalekeeper that the lower half of the body is a nightmare. I can’t draw the standard 8-head body length; all my characters end up six or so heads in proportional height because any time I try to draw legs as long as everyone says to, it always makes them look way too skinny and stretched.
Maybe that’s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
@whalekeeper @hybridlore wherever you decide to move this discussion, can you tag me too? I’m having fun learning about this.
@whaley wow I would watch a TV show or read a multi-part comic about those numbers as you think of them, that’s super cool.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Dante
At first, Dante watched the scene with mild interest, as one might watch a couple ants fighting on their sidewalk. As the seconds passed, though, he grew more concerned. And when Brian came charging into view, sword in hand, Dante jumped to his feet.
“Oi! Cool it! All of you!” He chased after them.
Dante arrived just a few…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@anyone
Speaking of conflict, those flaming balloons are going to loose altitude at some point and it is currently right next to the school…
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freedom replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 1 year, 10 months ago
@keilah-h Whatever you want! Lyrical, instrumental, whatever! ✨
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@linus-smallprint ooof Ender’s Game.
Good example for a dystopian writer, horribly graphic writing (and also the occasional curse words? I remember there being Marvel-level cursing but not much worse).
Luckily I’m not the kind who’s perturbed by violence in writing. Watching it would be a different story, but reading that kind of thing really…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
You’re not wantonly throwing bloody battle scenes in. You’re writing a realistic impression of a story.
Remember the missionaries to that one South American tribe that were brutally murdered, but the survivors came back to that tribe to continue the mission? Stories like that are what your writing reminds me of. This sounds really weird, but…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 1 year, 10 months ago
do the songs have to be lyrical or can some of them be instrumentals?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle Believe me, these stories are marketed for 8-year-olds:
- Wings of Fire (dragon series I read once with a good deal of violence. One character’s death is so graphic the writer didn’t even describe it, although that was in a side story that I didn’t read though cause it didn’t grab me.)
- Warrior cats series (LOTS of war and…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 1 year, 10 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed yessss I will totally do that!!
now to find some songs.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@jonas @whalekeeper @hybridlore
Felicity—Edge of ElderstrandFelicity filed whatever Marcel had just done under “figure out later” along with however she had gotten here in the first place. Her goal now was to avoid getting soaked. As she looked around, she saw that the streets were completely empty and every window was dark. It wasn’t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Dante
Suddenly, Dante remembered why he was talking to these two in the first place. He had planted the evidence and the boy was looking at him suspiciously. There was no reason to stick around.
“Well, nice talking to you. Gotta go now. I’ve got, uhh… homework.” With that, he sprinted off.
He found the rest of the Society waiting…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I have the worst timing for rps sorry guys
@whalekeeper @hybridlore @jonas
Felicity— idk I’m confused. She’s with Ellis Sara and Marcel
Felicity shoved her hat back on and glared at the sky. “I have some money. Let’s find an entrance quick.”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Oh I missed Hybrid’s post
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