@thelobsterlover
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Annnnnd you answered some of that already. XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Hmm. Often anxious, slightly pessimistic, nervous.
Give him something (or someone) he cares so much about that he would risk anxious situations to protect/keep/help. It could be something simple like a pet kitten or his father’s pocket watch, or something more complex like a best friend. What drives his anxiety? What is a cause he’d…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Hopefully not? But right now…maybe.
*Deep sigh of weariness*
Life is nuts right now. So yeah, it might take something kinda out there to stop my in my hamster wheel of days.
I should be back to something like normal in…two weeks?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
He keeps dying.
WHAT!?! XD
First you kill all my favorite of your own characters, and now you’re killing mine!
LOL
Okay, where were we?
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay.
I liked Aelic.
And I am now…mmmm.
*Glares*
I was honestly hoping Leon would somehow be able to take his place, even though I like Leon.
Besides my unhappiness over what happened, nice gut punch at the end. And um…
Honestly, this kid’s writer feels kinda sick after that, so she’s going to just step back and let…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle Well I think it’s great so far, so yep, you did your job.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
ohhhh.
By Draft 4 pretty much everything is solidified, right?
And I don’t mean “don’t make them die through the entire story,” just “don’t kill them this early in the book without a good replacement.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Speaking of which, I don’t put swearing in my animations….lol. That’s not what I meant.
It was the animation style and the characters that made my dad think of me.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Hmm. We’ll have to see.
What draft is this? If this is a first or second draft I could forgive you for killing them off and yeeting us into some random’s POV, cause it’s still rough and maybe you just figured out that killing them works for the story. But if it’s the final draft, almost ready for publishing, and you did that, I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle I read the section! Good to have the characters remember past events.
Also, I agree with Linus, I think they’re gonna live (or at least Leon and Julian will, Aelic could die or he could live); it seems a little early to kill these characters off, especially since you’ve provided no real replacement protagonists.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle not yet!! I just happened to see Linus’s reply while I was going through my emails. I’m doing animation work right now, but my “work” computer and my normal computer have the same email. I’ll read it when I’m on my other computer.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle That’s what I thought, it sounds like a girl’s name.
also that meme is peak humor lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
completely off topic but Bastille is an awesome name for a character. It sounds like a female name, but I guess it could be for a guy too.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle great job on this section!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@thearcaneaxiom I know you’re not here much but……
Remember this conversation?
Me: I can’t believe I’m doing this.
I’m asking you an Avatar The Last Airbender question.
I remember you were telling me to watch the show like your life depended on it years ago. Still like it?
You:
-Me being chronically inactive cause I’m about to serve a…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon ohhhh! That makes sense.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
coming back to answer the other questions!
i know I’ve been doing this a lot but it is super fun to be all three characters and figure out how they’d answer.
Like I wonder if either Huntress or Scout have gone hunting, or maybe they have family issues. Hey, have either of you killed someone?
Scout: Family issues, hah!…[Read more]
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