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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
@ellette-giselle that’s perfect, thanks!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
@hybridlore   @keilah-h
Lolololol.
Okay, well Joseph and Amelia ended up having nine kids. Mercy was the oldest of their children, with Beric being the oldest through adoption. (of that makes sense)
Beric and Quin designed a network of guys who went throughout Ardenta helping farmers recover land and people rebuild after the war. These g…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
No. I can’t. Not without an account. 😥
Could you try using Microsoft? I have an account with them, and it’s not attached to google. It’s honestly safer, which is why I went with them. And You can set it up for free.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
@ellette-giselle ^I second this.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
*Crying because I can’t comment or see y’all’s comments*
Nooo, this is so sad.
😭
Oh well. I guess it can’t be helped.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
I honestly have no idea on what my views on this whole election thing are. But I didn’t see Rowan’s conversion to be like, fake or forced or whatever.
The example of that criminal on the cross in the Bible, that happened, so I mean why can’t this one? Y’know?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
yeah, if you let yourself you can see it coming from page 1 of their book. It was always there and always inevitable.
as for Rowan, I believe in Holy election, and because of that, this works. That’s more of a Calvinist view though. Basically, Rowan would have never believed no matter how much time he had, unless God called him. A…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 4 hours ago
yay!! I’m so glad.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 5 hours ago
@ellette-giselle That makes sense.
I was surprised to find I liked it too!! It’s just a really satisfying end to this story somehow.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 5 hours ago
Wow really?! I’m glad you liked it!!
I like the time skip too. Oh. Odd. The original one has reference to WWI-II. It must have gotten lost when I was editing. Well, I kept adding greats, and it was getting stupid, so I cut it off at 3. About late 1300s to early 1400s is when I’d place the stories.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 5 hours ago
I love this ending!! I was worried with how dark it was looking, you were gonna leave it off on a less satisfying note. But the Fox journal was hopeful, and I honestly love how you time-skipped it into modern times. Which, interestingly, makes it seem more real to me, the fact that these places would still exist in the world we…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 5 hours ago
Hmm, that could work. I’ll try that.
Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.
Or does that not work.
I don’t know if that similarity between Leon and the prince was intentional or not, but try to pay a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 7 hours ago
So my dad just finished your report for Alec last night. Would you like me to email it, or copy and past it here?
Also, I just shut down my google account, and when I did, I realized I can no longer access you book! Is there a way I can do that without google?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 8 hours ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!
NEXT SECTION!
   Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 9 hours ago
Do whatever. I’m not sure really what to rp atm, since I don’t think Kepha has rped to my last rp.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 9 hours ago
I’ll jump on board any time.
Though, I don’t think Andrew will be able to since he will be gone almost all summer.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 9 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 11 hours ago
Thanks. I might!
I know!!!!!! I’m a terrible author!!! 😱😭
Wait a sec…… isn’t it my goal to make the reader miserable? 😈🤣
I promise to send the next section today. Right now. I’m running final edits this very moment.
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