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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Btw did you see I added chapter titles?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@savannah_grace2009 All righty! I’ll have to write some part of it for you to read.
and yeah I read fast lol
I’ll have to critique it fully tomorrow cause I don’t have time to type out a whole thing but I will get you that feedback!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@rae oh yeah and Alpha and Silvanis arguing sounds crazy.
why can I see a pair of angry Night Furies roaring at each other as the image of how that debate would go?
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now
They kind of are XD
We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually growls back or makes a stab of his own.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@rae thank you!! Glad you liked it, and yes I can agree the ending was amazing; when I read the original I was like “oh I gotta have this, it’s great”
I actually added the comic artist’s appearance; in the original, it simply shows them all talking and then the doorbell rings, then it switches to a panel of a door, then Scout opening the door an…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 5 days ago
of if I ever go onto the websites I put it at lowest and sometimes the second lowest age rating cause anything above that is awful
Smart.
but overall I just don’t go on them cause nobody ever finishes them anyways lol
Lol yeah.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@whalekeeper you’re welcome!!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I read all of what you had so far!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Sef and Lilitu’s frog wedding was so funny lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@savannah_grace2009 I’m liking it so far!!
I would say things are going a little fast, but that’s not you, it’s how fast I can read.
I love your character and place names, they’re really cool. And each new main character you introduce is really interesting!I have a story idea which is kinda similar to yours in terms of genre and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@koshka ooooh very cool!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@smiley good idea
I rarely go onto those sites too and if I do it’ll be specifically for a fic that has no shipping or that I’ve researched and know it’s clean shipping
and ugh I knowwwww nobody ever finishes their fanfics
like I read this one a little while ago that had a good plot and the characters were pretty accurate to the original…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@savannah_grace2009 I wouldn’t mind!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
kinda like how the Half-life games and Portal games are technically in the same universe but what you do in one has literally no bearing on the other.
(sorry for that seemingly random analogy, I was busy writing a fanfic using that story universe earlier, possibly a sequel to my TF2 one)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@rae oh okay, cool!!
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
He’s still a character of Wond, but otherwise he’s unrelated to my other stories.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Thank you for the feedback! I’m about to go edit the short story the scene is in, so this will be very helpful.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h
So…I just wrote this scene and i was wondering if it’s a little weird that I call the guy ‘Father’ all the time instead of giving him a real name. He isn’t a priest and he isn’t even Baron’s biological father. The reason I don’t give him a real name is that Baron doesn’t know what his real name is, he…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now
How do you deal with him? He seems a little tough.
We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
by the way you did finish the fic right?
Oh dear, I forgot to tell you with CWW and going back to school, sorry!
I really really liked the ending! It was so sweet. My only criticism would be I kinda didn’t understand fully what was going on before that point, Otherwise, it was great!
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