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@keilah-h

🤣 I figured Crosshair would go through something like that since you like him so much

@whalekeeper ahhh whoops!

well since you’ve already been spoiled, I’ll explain: Crosshair saves another trooper’s life, but the Empire isn’t willing to help him and leaves them both to die in the freezing cold. so Crosshair’s just like “forget this” and decides to defect from the Empire (finally).

Not before he nearly freezes and the other guy…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Well then, you’re much less responsible for torture than me, lol. I still haven’t found anyone who’s done the same things I’ve done.

I like the line work on that panel, verrry nice.

I wasn’t responsible for this either:

slight blood warning I guess? it’s not really that bad but still

hope I don’t get kicked off the site for this lol

he lives btw, he’s all scarred up but he makes it out okay. After 6 hours of being operated on.

@keilah-h

I know nothing about season 2 girl, I haven’t watched it. XD

@ellette-giselle

But it’s a three-way POV, so there are two other MCs.

Three-way POVs for the win. 🙃 I’m doing the same thing with my dream project. It’s so complex though, takes forever to figure out. But it is easier to make one MC less likable and tuck their POV under the rug until they’ve developed enough to root for.

Or this:

(again, spoiler warning, I’m so sorry)

@whalekeeper lol

Although, in my defense, I’m not responsible for some of the stuff that happened to my stolen adopted characters.

For example, you can’t say I was behind this:

(u did watch season 2 of bad batch right?? I hope so cause if not, sorry for the spoilers)

@loopylin

Does the hunger games thingy count as fan fiction though?

Never thought of it that way before, but yeah, you’re right.

I’m kinda busy rn too. (Finally got a job yayyyyyyy)

Yesssss 🎉😁 Finally!! That’s great!!

@whalekeeper

Nope, he’s an MC. But it’s a three-way POV, so there are two other MCs.

He’s also an interesting character because of his job…. so he has that going for him.

@koshka

Nooooo! The twins have separated!!!  😱

@ellette-giselle

I’m just going to let him grow on people as the story goes.

That makes sense. Is he a side character? I feel as if side characters are given more grace when it comes to these things because the story’s POV doesn’t depend on them. Protagonists with that personality are more difficult because readers don’t want to deal with that r…[Read more]

@koshka

Ooo! Yay!

Is your sister going with you?

@hybridlore

I know poor Aelic. This is my fourth time though that scene as a draft, (read it several times just for fun) and it still gets me. Ugh.

(I’m wondering what’s happening to Aiden now that Martin believed and died too. It would have been tough to see his brother and his cousin killed like that.)

I know!!! The poor kid! 😱

Guess we’…[Read more]

@koshka

Ooo yay! Graduation!

oh! So are you leaving home, or is it close enough to access?

@whalekeeper

no, not really! I like her ideas. I have written quiet moody characters, but I don’t know if they’re quite like this.

I have a current moody character, but he’s not super likeable. (except that he happens to be all my reader’s favorite) he’s doing the right thing, but he kinda hates the world. (and has good reason to) But then he…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Anything to add to Koshka? Since you sorely desired to smack my character, hehe

@koshka

Have him see someone else do something “uncomfortable” but right. Let him realize that was the right thing to do.

That’s already in my outline, too!! Golly, I have no idea what I’m doing but at least it seems to be logical. 😂

Pull out that sense of humor in his first scene, in how he views the world. Give a glimpse of who he could be, wan…

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@keilah-h

Yeah, these fanfics don’t surprise us.. XD

I can’t remember the last time I wrote fanfic. The only time I dedicated myself to something like that was when I wrote wholesome fluff for Mysterious Benedict Society, and a crossover between it and Secret Keepers by the same author.

That was maybe five years ago, hehe.

I almost think of character traits as plot points, so I’m still rearranging these thoughts in my head. XD