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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle wow….interesting section! I feel a bit bad for the one who believed right before the priest slashed his throat. But I agree with Leon, the sadness is tempered by the fact that they are in the presence of God Himself now.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I’ll stop info dumping on the roleplay forum now.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
since I explained Crosshair’s situation though I’ll explain his:
he was just betrayed by his own family. He was adopted, although his adoptive parents are dead, and when he met his biological parents they were literally just like “nope” and ditched him within like an hour, leaving him and the rest of his team alone in a broken down underwater…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@whalekeeper they really are the GOATs.
Having no emotional connection to Sniper, my eyes immediately go to the art technique. I’m heartless. XD
LOL!
it’d be weirder if you did have an emotional connection to him with no prior knowledge of what’s going on.
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Oh really? I love them. It’s so fun to start tying them together in subtle ways.
Oh don’t get me wrong, I still love it.
And neither of the two guys have met. 😂
And that’s when things get fun, when characters are technically connected but they haven’t met yet
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Oh really? I love them. It’s so fun to start tying them together in subtle ways.
In the first one, all three end up frequenting the same cafe at different times, and only a few readers pick that up because I never state the name, but I describe the surroundings the same. Things like that.
One of the MC’s works with another…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@trailblazer I remember the Narnia quote!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Ikr? Awesome
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
ok but looking at it even closer you can see little shockwaves from the bullets right before they strike his belly/chest. That’s DETAILED.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Graphic novel artists are the goat, for real. I don’t know how they do it.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
my brain: he just got SHOT and is BLEEDING OUT IN A FLOODING UNDERWATER FACILITY and you’re commenting on the LINEWORK????
Having no emotional connection to Sniper, my eyes immediately go to the art technique. I’m heartless. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Multiple POVs are lowkey traumatizing for my brain because you have to tie so many different colored strings together. It’s madness. Madness, I tell yea.
Escape while you still can… *Gazes into the distance* *Flops face down into my pile of manuscripts*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@loopylin @the_lost-journal oh man these are flippin’ hilarious!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@whalekeeper haha! I’m decently nice to my characters…..sometimes. There’s torture on the menu, but it’s not always.
I like the line work on that panel, verrry nice.
my brain: he just got SHOT and is BLEEDING OUT IN A FLOODING UNDERWATER FACILITY and you’re commenting on the LINEWORK????
jk I love the linework too and have tried to replicate…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@whalekeeper LOLLLLLLLLLLL
mentally broken snipers are my boys
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Ooo! Cool!
I did one with the first book in the series and I’ve decided to keep going with it thought the whole trilogy.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
🤣 I figured Crosshair would go through something like that since you like him so much
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@whalekeeper ahhh whoops!
well since you’ve already been spoiled, I’ll explain: Crosshair saves another trooper’s life, but the Empire isn’t willing to help him and leaves them both to die in the freezing cold. so Crosshair’s just like “forget this” and decides to defect from the Empire (finally).
Not before he nearly freezes and the other guy…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Well then, you’re much less responsible for torture than me, lol. I still haven’t found anyone who’s done the same things I’ve done.
I like the line work on that panel, verrry nice.
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