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@grcr very cool, and I like his name!

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @grcr @raxforge

Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Brutus held his drenched scarf up over his nose, his eyes shifting to the boy. He didn’t speak, he merely looked the boy up and down, before breaking out into a few coughs. Recovering himself, Brutus walked over the form of the…[Read more]

@jonas

I think you should send in something more powerful, cuz Brutus…To him this is all fly swatting, and I’m sorry, but I can’t drag fly swatting out

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @jonas @grcr @hybridlore @raxforge

Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, Julian, Fel, Ellis Sara, Marcellus, and the other Marcellus, our favorite neighborhood godling, Elderstrand Edge (I had fun typing that all out XD)

“You guys should make a quick plan!”

The wind around Brutus rose in int…[Read more]

If anyone’s interested, I’m working on a graphite drawing of the painting St. Sebastian by Carlo Dolci. I can post it once I’m done.

@freed_and_redeemed

Awwwwwwwwww Ryo! I remember the cutie!!!

He loved Bucky if I remember right.

@freed_and_redeemed

Yay! Leon and Riker working together! I love it!

As for triggers, Riker, I believe, would avoid guns and the sounds of gunshots. I have a neighbor with PTSD from serving and his wife asks us not to shoot anything more than air rifles or bows and other quiet things because the boom of a gunshot can trigger him. Maybe Riker…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Lol. Whaley tagged me @rar and Ellette tagged me @ rea

This is very amusing.

@ellette-giselle I echo Linus’s statement–this was a great way to re-introduce Adrian to the narrative!

@power I had a song on in the background that started epic then turned really goofy as I read your little poem and it was perfect for it lolllll

thing is, it was by complete coincidence.

@freed_and_redeemed oooh nice scene!!

@ellette-giselle

Whoa, what happened to Brutus’ speech?

When whispering, /s/ and /t/ are most pronounced and can be overheard. Brutus often replaces these sounds with /th/ when whispering. It’s a precaution.

@ellette-giselle no it’s not bad, I just haven’t read it yet. Lol

@power

XD. I like that.

@grcr

Wow, he looks cooler than I imagined XD

Well done!

@ellette-giselle @grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @hybridlore @loopylin @jonas

Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Marcellus, Flare, Leon, and Julian, about to meet up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel, I think. Elderstrand edge.

Yay. A storm. Brutus felt an unintentional rise in his powers, formulating itself as a barrier of wind around him. Brutus…[Read more]

@grcr very cool!

also I agree with whalekeeper that the lower half of the body is a nightmare. I can’t draw the standard 8-head body length; all my characters end up six or so heads in proportional height because any time I try to draw legs as long as everyone says to, it always makes them look way too skinny and stretched.

Maybe that’s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @hybridlore wherever you decide to move this discussion, can you tag me too? I’m having fun learning about this.

@whaley wow I would watch a TV show or read a multi-part comic about those numbers as you think of them, that’s super cool.

@linus-smallprint ooof Ender’s Game.

Good example for a dystopian writer, horribly graphic writing (and also the occasional curse words? I remember there being Marvel-level cursing but not much worse).

Luckily I’m not the kind who’s perturbed by violence in writing. Watching it would be a different story, but reading that kind of thing really…[Read more]

You’re not wantonly throwing bloody battle scenes in. You’re writing a realistic impression of a story.

Remember the missionaries to that one South American tribe that were brutally murdered, but the survivors came back to that tribe to continue the mission? Stories like that are what your writing reminds me of. This sounds really weird, but…[Read more]

do the songs have to be lyrical or can some of them be instrumentals?