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Ingrid started the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 6 months ago
Okay, y’all.
Here are the first couple chapters of the first draft of my fantasy WIP, Substitute. Please, please, please be harsh. Pick it apart. 🙂
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mfYLvDN_yaH-bZPaBtSAFRid80w3Pm6NgUrJUZrQkG4/edit
Imma tag the people who critiqued the Prologue before, but anyone can edit!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
There is some shuffling, then more silence.
“Brek, what—?”
The door bursts open.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@alia @bekreations *beam* Thanks for bringin’ this back, guys! I don’t know what to add, but… 🙂 *thumbs up*
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 6 months ago
@ariella-newheart Why thank you. 🙂 And I love your version of Aspen!!!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic My Life is Novellas in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 heh… I’ve got the opposite problem. 😛
*scratches head* I would say probably the number one thing that makes my novels so ridiculously long is the crazy amount of time I spend really delving into the layers of chemistry in live scenes. I try to do all live scenes if I possibly can (no summaries, no overviews, no generalizations)…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 6 months ago
@notawriter Oh, I’m so glad you like her!
@sarah-anson Those are epic!!! 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 6 months ago
@catwing I love those!!! 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Sure thing! Wow, that’s rough.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 6 months ago
Oops. @daughteroftheking
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 6 months ago
@daugtheroftheking Oh ho. Me likey. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 6 months ago
@notawriter I can’t remember if you’re on a hiatus or not, but I thought I’d tag you again just in case you missed this. 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 6 months ago
@0-0enyali0-0 Somehow I missed this…I love it!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 6 months ago
@notawriter Hope you don’t mind: I gave Aspen a try! She was super fun and sounds like a cool character. I attempted the glass sword, although I’m not sure it turned out right. 🙂
Hope you like her!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 6 months ago
I have a character that needs a face.
Devin Watt—15 years old, has green eyes and brown hair. He usually wears jeans and T-shirt. He also has a tattoo of a triangle on his right arm. Personality: sarcastic, adventurous, usually pretty rash in his decision-making. He also has a melancholy side, however. So there. Anyone wanna give him a g…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Welp. I gotta go again. Byeee!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Same as yesterday. The sequel for my fantasy WIP. 🙂 Wbu?
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine I know I’m late, but I am here now (for a little while). 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Oh! So my director adapted the story of Cinderella for the stage (she wrote the script) and she also wrote the songs since it’s a musical. There were a few changes made to the story like Ella’s dead mother comes back and transforms her dress, instead of a fairy-godmother. Things like that. 🙂 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@skredder The sequel of my fantasy series. 🙂 And I actually have to go eat dinner now because I have to leave. (I have play performances for a show of Cinderella every night this week…) Talk to you later!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@skredder @rochellaine I’m joining for a limited amount of time… 🙂
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