Elizabeth

@that_writer_girl_99 Not sure exactly what you’re referring to, but I think everything I said was good. Keep at it! May the ideas be with you.

@jenali @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @daeus @kate-flournoy I’m going to see how well I can write, even though I can’t see anything because of the glare. 😛

@jenali @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @daeus @kate-flournoy I’m going to see how well I can write, even though I can’t see anything because of the glare. LP

@That_Writer_Girl_99 yeah. What he said. XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 I’ll just repeat what Kate said that the character voice is really well done. I’m especially surprised you’ve been able to get this good without anyone critiquing you. Honestly, that’s downright crazy.

It does seem that the plot needs some development though, as well as the question of what to do with the elementals.

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@That_Writer_Girl_99 ooooohhhh… you know what? It looks like you’ve got really good potential here for a disillusionment story. I really, really love the idea of the world outside being even worse than the prison.
What do you know about theme/message and building your story around it?
Because if you do have the world outside be worse than the…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 no, I know. It isn’t. 😛 Have you come up with any ideas so far? Need help brainstorming? Seriously, just dump them all right here and I’ll help you pick through them if I can. That’s what we do here. We’re all writers after all… 😉 Even if you think the ideas are dumb, please— share them. I have dumb ideas all the time.…[Read more]

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Wow.
Okay, first of all, may I just say congratulations on the very strong character voice. Most people go for the snazzy voices of characters like Tam to carry their story if it’s first person, but I love the subtle yet very distinct tone of Kara’s. It’s beautiful.

In fact, your prose itself is actually very strong, and I…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 I totally get that. You’ll be fine. I promise. 😉 Tag me when you do post and I’ll get back to you with opinions as soon as I’ve done a thorough read through. 🙂

@That_Writer_Girl_99 ha. XD Not at all…

@That_Writer_Girl_99 *salutes* reporting for duty! And really, we’re not monsters. 😀 Just start a new topic over in General Writing Discussions or something and we’ll have a nice little critiquing party with cake and brownies and punch for everyone. 😀 (Virtual, of course. *wink*)

Haha. Thanks, @that_writer_girl_99. It took me a good five minutes to decide which TARDIS picture I wanted to use…

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So is the whole relationship that Alex is involved with throughout the season?
@f5a8c3e92, doctor who fan?

@that_writer_girl_99 I don’t watch many movies anymore either, but you’re right, this one is amazing. 🙂

@that_writer_girl_99 Sorry about that. I can be a bit abrasive sometimes… I have some other INFP friends and I have to be careful around them. They’re too precious for me to hurt. My mum’s an ISFP and we often clash.

@that_writer_girl_99 It’s about Corrie ten Boom’s teenage resistance army and how they helped to save Jews. 🙂 It’s full of action and the demonstration of “greater love.”

Thank you @that_writer_girl_99

That’s wonderful that you like photography as well! Your phone definitely counts. 😉

A favorite movie? Return to the Hiding Place is inspiring to me.

@that_writer_girl_99 I’m an INTJ. My dominant functions are Ni-Te. I am literally the NIGHT (NiTe). Keep the sun away from me! 😛

@that_writer_girl_99 Ah, yes, the shows that were around when I was little were the good ones. 😛
@daeus I’m signing out now. I wrote about 850 words, not much of it being dialogue, but I think it’s good action, so I’m happy with it.

@that_writer_girl_99 Great idea. The world will be killed through my words…