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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@dragon-snapper @ethryndal @winter-rose @graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99 I’ll be writing for about a half an hour if anyone wants to join.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
All right @That_Writer_Girl_99 read through the document, and left a comment in one place, but otherwise you did good. 😀 You’re handling Matthias with more subtlety. *thumbs up*
Have you figured out your plot problems? Any way I can help you?
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum 9 years ago
So, remember a few KP newsletter contest back, when it was the girl holding up the Wonderland hitchhiking sign? Well, I wrote an entry for that, but unfortunately didn’t turn it in in time. But I have been thinking about turning it into a short story. Problem is, I really like what I’ve written, I just can’t think of a beginning, a background for…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @aratrea Actualy, I am a Weird ‘E’. I am very outgoing with people I know, like you guys, but strangers freak me out and I clam up. And then there’s the really awkkward period where I kindd of know you so am talking to you but am still very quiet and reserved. I also like being by myself, and could probaby go for awhile like…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 no, you’re doing and have done great. Just last I checked you were having problems with the plot, and that’s the one thing that really hangs me up when I struggle with that.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 quick tip: look at your different character motivations. Each character is the hero of his or her own story. What are they aiming for? What is it they want? Kara’s not going to be the only one moving the plot. Each person’s life is an entire story. You chose to tell those stories through Kara’s eyes, but they’re still separate…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 *waves and offers pizza*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 I promise I haven’t forgotten you. I’m really busy right now so I will get to this as soon as possible, but it may be a bit. 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Thank you for the input. I shall see what I can do. *alright words. You are at my command, so why don’t you do something*
@perfectfifths Oh goody! I need picky people. 😛 Thanks for the edits! I need them all!
@rolena-hatfield Hmm…I see what you mean. *note to self for future reference*
@ethryndal Shorty Stories… Ah,…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @anne-of-lothlorien Good. Now, if I catch you fighting over something again I shall…steal @kate-flournoy‘s tabasco sauce!
@graciegirl Yes. The butterflies are quite annoying. -
Gracie replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper *horrified gasp* You wouldn’t!!
@that_writer_girl_99 NO!!!! We have share the pictures! I MUST HAVE THE SEQUEL TO THE LEGEND OF KING DAEUS!!!!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 could you give me the link to the doc again? Mine is doing weird things.
That sounds like a great solution. Good job. I notice you’re thinking in wider perspectives now— purposefully using the interactions to develop or manipulate. *wiggles eyebrows* Excellent work, my young padawan. 😉
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Bye @that_writer_girl_99 ( by the way, it’s really cool to be on here at the exact same time as other KeePers )
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@jess @that_writer_girl_99 Thanks.
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @Anne-of-lothlorien
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99
Well, I’ll take it and join you if @Daeus won’t… 😛 I’ll probably be writing for half an hour -
Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 You can write about different things but with a consistent theme or style.
I don’t think @ethryndal has a theme, but she certainly has a style. I really think every blogger should have a style. Nonfiction can be an art form too.
If you can have a theme though, go for it. For instance, you may not want to write about…[Read more]
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
*pokes head in door* What? Did someone mention me? *scrolls through conversation*
@that_writer_girl_99 So I’ve been blogging for almost two years. Not super impressive, but I guess I know enough to share something. I’ve had two blogs, and only one is currently running. I started my blog because I didn’t want to always write books 24/7,…[Read more] -
Ethryndal replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Also, @that_writer_girl_99, I wouldn’t listen to much I have to say as I really know nothing about blogging. I do it for my own entertainment mostly. 🙂
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Daeus Please tell me you’re saving all your marketing words of wisdom in a Word document or something. Seriously, you need to compile them all and sell it as a book.
@That_writer_girl_99 Well, I started my blog for a number of reasons. First, because I wanted to have some variety in my writing life; only writing my book 24/7 got a little tedious…[Read more]
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