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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose @jess You guys there?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 sounds like a plan.
Ahhh… you can do it. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 Adios.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Aw, really? I’m glad to hear that. 😀 My pleasure.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@jess @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @winter-rose @graciegirl
For those of you hearing this, I plan to edit for an hour here. To victory!
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@jess @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @winter-rose @gracie-girl
For those of you hearing this, I plan to edit for an hour here. To victory!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 meh. Logic. Who cares about logic? 😛
Forget the logic for a sec. What is the most natural emotional course for the characters? Go wild. Not even kidding.
And one question that might give you some answers— what is the Warden going to do with Blake? What are they saying/doing, locked up in that office together? -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
*pulls out sword pen and sticks it behind her ear* How can I help?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Oooooh, I like it!
There is one thing that could use tweaking though. Both Kara and Matthias seem a little scattered and unfocused as to their emotional state. Now they’re supposed to be; I know. They’re both confused. But the reader shouldn’t be. It’s not that both of them shouldn’t be struggling with several different emotions at once, but that…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@that_writer_Girl_99 Have fun! And yes, I am impressed anyway. I can hardly sing, though I’m trying to learn.
@winter-rose *raises hands* I plead not guilty!
I’d love to stay longer, but I’ve to eat and get ready for guitar lessons. -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 don’t think so. Heading over there now.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 *appears in a poof of elvish stardust**adjusts Jedi robes* You wanted to talk about chapter seven?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Nice! Do you know what you’re singing?
@winter-rose Sorry. This time it was an accident though. I sneezed. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@That_writer_girl_99 Ooh! Where ya’ going? Or is that secret dragon confidential stuff? 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Hello!
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Daeus posted an update 8 years, 10 months ago
@kate-flournoy @sierra-r @aratrea @that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose
Hi guys,
I have a rather enormous announcement/request to make.
For a while now, I’ve been wanting to create my own e-course. I’ve had an idea for it too. I wanted to cover the “show don’t tell” rule. Now, to many people, that would seem like a crazy idea for a course, since…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@hope Great! See ya around!
@that_writer_Girl_99 I’m lonely now, if you’re out there in the world somewhere. I’m editing. 😀 -
Snapper started the topic Happy 4th! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Hey, Americans! Happy 4th of July!
@daeus @kate-flournoy @ethryndal @jess @hope @aratrea @that_writer_Girl_99 @rolena-hatfield @graciegirl @alltheamericans -
Kate Flournoy posted a new activity comment 8 years, 10 months ago
Well, I say go for it. The worst that can happen is failure. 😛 So comforting, right?
Not going to lie; articles are harder to get published than, say, poems, (I tried and was rejected a few years back) but if you never try you’ll never know.If you do decide to do this, I have one question for you— is it a theoretical article or a testimonial…[Read more]
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I’d say it’s theoretical. It’s definitely not testimonial.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@jess @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @daeus @kate-flournoy @graciegirl @daughteroftheking @anne-of-lothlorien @ethryndal I haven’t been here of late, but I shall make a change to that!
I’M HERE!!!
“By nightfall these hills will be crawling with orcs.” (or writers, in this case.) - Load More
Really, really want to do this… I do need to be careful about how much time I realistically have, though. :/ What’s your planned schedule for this and when you’d need feedback by?
Ah, I should have mentioned that. My pace with this is going to be a little bit slow. I’ll try to write about a lesson a week. I only have my outline so far and a knowledge of the points I want to cover for each lesson. So this would be a gradual thing. I think honestly it might take me six months to get nailed down, though I might get ambitious…[Read more]
Got ya. I could give you feedback along the lines of #1 and #2 up through September 1st. After that, I may be able to give some sporadic feedback, but that will be completely dictated by my school schedule.
Okay, thanks. 😀 We’ll run with it.
Yes, yes, and yes again. When do I start?
I’m in. Absolutely. When do I start?
Haha. 😀 Great! Well, right now, if you want. This isn’t letting me post my original message, so I’ll try one piece at a time.
And here’s access to the course file. https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0BzI8MlrraNgHekR6TWtEa2RTYW8?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W87kcWtV1azNc5zA34D9jQ3yNl-wbnGDgYOnxAhrs5k/edit
I’ll try to do some lesson outlines this week. Maybe even today.
@kate-flournoy
WOW. You’ve got a lot of categories. 😛 I love it.
Me too! This is awesome.
Ah, time is a tricky thing. Well, I’ll leave it up to you. Does it make sense for you to do this if you’ll only be able to cover the first (and admittedly simplest) part? If so, I’d be glad to have you. If you’re not so sure though, you could potentially be a beta viewer when this part’s done. Or you just ignore this course and have a good life. 😛
@kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @aratrea Part 1 has outlines for all the lessons if you’d like to go check them out. 🙂 I’m hoping to write out lesson one today.
@sierra-r Have you seen this yet?
Awesome! I’ll look them over today, probably later tonight. @daeus
@Daeus which one is part one…
Part 1 – emotion telling. Right at the top of my outline. There are four lessons listed under it.
Aha, thanks. Found it. 😉
Which lessons make up Part 1? Is there a doc somewhere that categorizes/lists all these lessons?
Here’s the outline https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W87kcWtV1azNc5zA34D9jQ3yNl-wbnGDgYOnxAhrs5k/edit
In parentheses at the top it says (part 1 – emotion telling) The four lessons under that are the ones that have outlines.