Elizabeth

@ingridrd  @gabbyj  Thank you! I had fun with both of them 🙂

@salome01w4g  I’m praying for you, friend.  Hang in there!

@dekreel  Thank youuuuu!!!!  I lover her, especially the eyes!!!!

Identical thoughts to @daeus Good premise, and if the entire story isn’t going to be as dark in the first chapters, you just want to include enough glimpses of light to indicate that. I don’t personally have a problem with dark, depressing stories when there’s a point to them, but you don’t want to unintentionally indicate that’s the type of story…[Read more]

@his-instrument I love the plot line.

I don’t know if I’ll be able to read the first chapters, but just some thoughts. I think you can set a tone in these first chapters that lets your reader know you’re not out to scare them. If you don’t get too graphic with the murder and torture scene and you give the reader one or two, morally good, hopeful…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking  @salome01w4g  As am I, actually! Me too, please!  And N.C. I’ll definitely pray for you 😉

@his-instrument  I love the storyline!

It does sound kind of dark. Maybe you could like spread out the dark a little bit…?

Anyway, sure! I’ll read it. 🙂

Someone who has more experience with plot line might be of more use, though…

@daeus  @aratrea  @sam-kowal  @seekjustice  @jane-maree  @princessfoo  @introvert_girl

(P.S. This is comple…[Read more]

Oh, no!! 🙁 🙁 🙁

Oh, great. Now you’re making me nervous about cars! ;P

Praying hard!! *big hug*

“How about an invisible sandwich? You’re eating a sandwich, but everyone thinks you’re crazy.”

@seekjustice ohh…
@everyone I must sleep. good night.

@alia I’m confused…
@dekreel Yes!
@seekjustice Perhaps… *grin*

@seekjustice  I might have not seen it the first time. *shrug* Anyway, thank you!!

@daeus  @introvert_girl  Okay thanks! 🙂

@catwing  Not bad! My favorite line: “I can cut your cake into perfect fifths! The most perfect fifths!”

LOLOL!

@alia There will be more parts that’s why it isn’t much of an ending.
I will fix the rush!
@dekreel did you read it? What do you think?

@seekjustice alrighty then I’ll make it less rushed. (Yeah I did rush cause it’s a bit of a Christmas story *shrug*)
Thank you. *florishes a bow* More is yet to come.
Sorry y’all haven’t showed up yet (also @shannon @alia )
Anything you want in there?

@catwing YAYYY! Your KPA!

@seekjustice  Can I see your blog please? 😀

@shannon Thanks! I forgot how you spelled her name. *nervous laughter*
@alia Thank you!
Do you guys have any suggestions for this one or the next one?

@gabbyj  @ingridrd

*laughs* Sorry @dragon-snapper but you posted a quote that I knew. *shrug*
Bye!