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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@warrioroftherealm *salutes* Awesome!
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@christianna-hellwig @rochellaine @emma-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99
Thanks so much for your suggestions, everyone! Here’s what I have now.
“Oh, stars that remember the firstthings forgotten
How earth and its peoples were early begotten
They looked and beheld through a pane of dark glass
The earth in a swirling, untamable mass
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Catwing replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you, potato-squash is my random-non-random thingie. :3
Also thank you! I can be funny. Sometimes.@salome01w4g I think you can do it! Maybe it can go on your resume.
~Made a poem out of a random-non-random phrase some internet Catwing said. It was later awarded such-and-such medal. It also made you hungry. (And by you I mean…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 8 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine I think that counts too. At least for my research and questions. 😀 Thank you.
@sleepwalkingmk *facepalm* I completely forgot that she needs to go to school. But she will be homeschooled. How did I overlook that?
@sarah-anson Sadly Vanessa will still have to be school while they are there.
I’m a perfect angel.
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@christianna-hellwig Thanks so much! I’ll take a look over this as soon as I get a chance.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 3 months ago
Whoops @introvert_girl
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 3 months ago
@dekreel Oh okay! Hmmm…I’m not sure that sounds very feminine.
@introvert-girl Persephone!!!! YAS. 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 3 months ago
@skredder I’ve seen that movie! Unfortunately I’m pretty sure it’s her last name
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I’m not even going to ask why DYING was the first thing your mind came to… I’m sure it’s some strange INFP thing that I probably don’t want to know about.
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Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 3 months ago
@ingridrd Yes it’s a girl. … Can Peregrine be a girl’s name?
@rochellaine That’s funny — I was JUST on that site! Unfortunately I didn’t find names I like :-/
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@emma-flournoy Ha! Well, we’ll see. I’d certainly love to.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Ha. Those are literally the story of my life. 😂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writing Inspiration in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@hannah-c Boy, do I need this reminder sometimes. 🙂 To be honest, I’m at a weird stage in my writing career. I’m struggling to find time to write *coughschoolcough*, but I want to write so bad. All. The. Time. And that just doesn’t work when life is so busy. *sighs*
I guess I need to start making time to write because I don’t want my…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@Daeus Thanks.
Well, you’d better come up with an epic soundtrack for it then. 😉
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Aaaaaand this is why I need to start being more active around here again. I miss stuff like this.
WOOT FOR YOU, @That_Writer_Girl_99. I can’t believe it’s been a whole year! You’ve been a grand addition to our little circle. Thank you for letting me snark at you and beat you up for not liking Lord of the Rings. Bantering with you has been a…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 3 months ago
@dekreel Is your character a girl?
All I can think of are names like Peregrine (for a boy), Parrianne and Perris (those aren’t that good, I know). 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sure, here’s one. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV9qnLtpy4Cwn8-JFfJaXzOn4A5-yqRBR-AqlFIyYdk/edit?usp=sharing
Yeah, song creation and all that. I probably should have come up with something more original, but in my defense the song creation is the basis for the whole magical system, the last book’s allegorical aspects, and the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @rochellaine Thanks. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@Daeus Oh hey, could I have it in a doc too? I was going to do it without one, but that sounds a much more efficient option.
I don’t write poetry, but I certainly appreciate good poetry, especially with good cadence. That’s my favorite part.
I read through it, and it’s beautiful, and I do have some metrical suggestions.
Also, I feel compelled…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine @jenali @epicaddie2 @the-real-kapeefer
Thank you all! 😀
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