Elizabeth

That seems rather straightforward, haha. I think it’s the expanding thing I have a problem with–coming up with interesting things to sprinkle into the scene, coming up with dialogue, and all that.

Ah, yes…I was there…though I didn’t intend on the discussion going in that direction…

I’ve never been great with travel scenes, either. They tend to be rather boring…

Ugh, I’m hitting a wall…

Chapter outlines–anyone have tips on how to start writing them?

Yes, definitely! @sierra-r

I’m here, I’m here! I’ll be planning for half an hour. @dragon-snapper @jane-maree

@audrey-caylin Hi, don’t think we’ve met yet! I’m new!

I’ll start planning again later, I have a math quiz that unfortunately needs my attention… @daeus @dragon-snapper @ethryndal

Haha, no worries, I’m sure someone on here knows how to. @ethryndal

I need to write my chapter outlines, but I honestly don’t know how to…

Ah! *cowers in fear*

You are forgiven @ethryndal

@ethryndal Leave it to you to go Gollum on us while I’m having a deep, thoughtful moment… *rolls eyes* *laughs*

I agree with @ethryndal

I think there’s a fine line between deciding to let a character get away with his actions–in spite of what he does to get revenge–and crafting a path for the character that shows the consequences for revenge. If you think about it, a lot of stories in the Bible show this theme; anger has consequences, which is why the…[Read more]

I agree with @ethryndal

I think there’s a fine line between deciding to let a character get away with his actions–in spite of what he does to get revenge–and crafting a path for the character that shows the consequences for revenge. If you think about it, a lot of stories in the Bible show this theme; anger has consequences, which is why the…[Read more]

I agree with @ethryndal…I think there’s a fine line between deciding to let a character get away with his actions–in spite of what he does to get revenge–and crafting a path for the character that shows the consequences for revenge. If you think about it, a lot of stories in the Bible show this theme; anger has consequences, which is why the…[Read more]

Oh, I’m getting that impression too, don’t worry. I love it here already. 😉

@Daeus I can’t start planning again until my schoolwork is done…curse you, dual-enrollment classes…

Mm, good topic. I can appreciate everything being said here, because inevitably, I will have to consider if I want to include this in my WIP…

But, split personalities? Gollum impressions? I’m starting to wonder what I got myself into by joining KP…

Was that a LOTR character reference? I haven’t read the books, so I don’t know…

Thanks for the input. I think I’ve already decided on not including any romance in my WIP (for now) because it doesn’t fit in with the plot.

Oh, I love analogies. Just don’t get me started on Doctor Who references, I won’t stop…

See ya round! @dragon-snapper

Oh, I love analogies. Just don’t get me started on Doctor Who references, I won’t stop…